Chapter 4 - Whispers of Love - When Sasuke turns Evil
Submitted January 2, 2006 Updated January 3, 2006 Status Incomplete | These are little poems, most likely an offshoot from ShinobiWolf's Broken Song. If anyone reads this who knows ShinobiWolf, please tell him/her to read this. I'd like the critiscm so I can write better.
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Chapter 4 - Whispers of Love - When Sasuke turns Evil
Chapter 4 - Whispers of Love - When Sasuke turns Evil
Whispers of Love - When Sasuke Turns Evil
I can feel her soft touch behind me
Yet somehow I don't hear her at all
There's something whispering in my ear
And I can't hear its ruthless call
I'm in a place, a place where love reigns
And I'm an outcast in this place
I am controlled by a simple curse mark
I can't see her sad, sad face
I'm having this feeling
And it's not the curse
I wonder, what is it?
The feeling's fading, the hurt's getting worse
If I could hear her, I certainly would
I can't bear it when she starts to cry
But I can't hear or feel the love
No matter how hard I try
Wait! The curse mark is going away
I can feel her touch of a dove
I can hear and feel affection again
The powerful curse was beaten by whispers of love.
I can feel her soft touch behind me
Yet somehow I don't hear her at all
There's something whispering in my ear
And I can't hear its ruthless call
I'm in a place, a place where love reigns
And I'm an outcast in this place
I am controlled by a simple curse mark
I can't see her sad, sad face
I'm having this feeling
And it's not the curse
I wonder, what is it?
The feeling's fading, the hurt's getting worse
If I could hear her, I certainly would
I can't bear it when she starts to cry
But I can't hear or feel the love
No matter how hard I try
Wait! The curse mark is going away
I can feel her touch of a dove
I can hear and feel affection again
The powerful curse was beaten by whispers of love.
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TailsNejiswife on February 8, 2006, 10:02:59 AM
Narufan on January 29, 2006, 11:56:59 AM
Narufan on
NONONONONONONO!SASUKE IS SUPPOSED TO BE WITH NARUTO U MORON!HA NO LIKE SAKURA SHE GOT TOO BIG OF A FORHEAD!i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:39:35 AM
i_luv_kyo on
this one's good too...you're extremely talented.
narutogirlninja on January 7, 2006, 3:26:24 AM
really really good! wow u make poems better than me.=^-^=
at least sasuke isn't gay