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Chapter 4 - The Walk part1

This is a REALLY FUNNY comic that im making into a story.

Chapter 4 - The Walk part1

Chapter 4 - The Walk part1
Allison2:Uh...if you say so.

Rachel comes in with a notepad writing...

Rachel:The sandwich walked away and I had no more sandwich.

Allison(looking over Rachel's notepad):Whad ja write?

Rachel:I figured out I dunked sandwich in instead of the sandwich I made.

Allison:Who's sandwich?

Rachel:My friend sandwich who can walk and talk like Amie's hat.

Allison:I know what'll make ya feel better! A nice walk!

Allison2:How long a walk?

Allison:6 miles.

Allison2:6 MILES? ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?????

Allison:C'mon! Ya scared?

Allison2:OF COURSE NOT! ALLISON2 NEVER IS AFRAID!

Allison:Are you from now on gonna refer yourself to the 3rd person?

Allison2:Uh heh. Very funny.

Allison:We are going to walk from Ash Cave Cabins to Old Mans Cave and
no one is gonna stop us!

Allison2:Good for you. I'm gonna stop myself.

Allison:OH NO YOU DONT! I'M TAKING YOU WITH ME!

Allison, Allison2, and Rachel walk to the car and Allison2 drives it to
Old Mans Cave.

Allison2:Wait Aren't we going from Ash Cave Cabins to Old Mans Cave not
the other way around.

Allison explains that in a weird way that makes no sence.

Allison:Hey look at this weird writing!

Allison2:I cant read it.

Rachel:Are they those things that people wrote long a-

Allison:Hyrogliphics!

Rachel:Oh yeah! I knew it started with an "H"

Allison:C'mon lets go!

They walk through the woods and spotted a broken bridge.

Allison2:Well we won't be able to go through there so let's turn around!

Allison:Hello? Ever heard of jumping? We are on this trip for adventure not for quiting!

They jump across the bridge when Rachel is suddenly hanging from the bridge.

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ThE_uNkNoWn_OnE on June 5, 2005, 5:29:50 AM

ThE_uNkNoWn_OnE on
ThE_uNkNoWn_OnEUmm.... what does this Rachel look like? I now have an idea for my entry!

orchid on December 21, 2004, 1:49:17 PM

orchid on
orchidwow, a cliff-hanger...or sould i say BRIDGE-hanger!

so whats gonna happen? she gonna live? she gonna die? huh,huh,huh? I MUST KNOW THE ENDING!!!