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Chapter 5 - The Walk Part 2

This is a REALLY FUNNY comic that im making into a story.

Chapter 5 - The Walk Part 2

Chapter 5 - The Walk Part 2
Rachael: HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Allison: Rachel! Hold on!

Rachael hand suddenly slips and she falls Allison and Allison 2 look down worried seeing Rachael falling down forever.

Allison: we have to get her!

Allison jumps down.

Allison: XL TRANSFORM!!!

Allison flies as fast as she can to get Rachael, but she's too far down to catch. Allison 2 is behind the brige still looking down noticing Allison comming back up with a lake of tears in her eyes.

Allison: She's *sniff* she's gone.

Allison 2: NO! NO SHE ISN'T! *tries to stay calm* we'll find her.

Allison: No we won't she's gone forever...falling foever.

Allison 2: Allison, sit down for a second.

Allison sits on a log.

Allison 2: Allison, you can't give up hope. Even though she's gone now she's not gone forever. We'll find her later don't worry about it. The adventure could be dead ahead of us. Come on let's walk!

Allison smiles and gets up.

Allison: hey! we're at Ash Cave already!

Allison 2: quick... Let's skip some rocks! Allison...

Allison is sitting on a rock crying

Allison 2: Allison...what's up?

Allison: Rachel woudl've dunked a sanwich in the water.

Allison 2: *sigh* ya know we're going on this trip again right? same people, same time.

Allison: what if we don't get Rachael back?

Allison 2: We will.

Allison: how do you know? she's not gonna pop outta nowhere!

Allison 2: But if you belive that she will she might actually do what you belive she'll do.

Allison: Let's move on.







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orchid on May 27, 2005, 4:32:57 AM

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orchid*gasp* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! COME BACK RACHEL!!!!

YAY!!! YOU GOT MORE ON!!! ^o^