Chapter 1 - When he comes...
Submitted September 12, 2004 Updated September 12, 2004 Status Incomplete | It's how i feel pinned between these two people....
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Chapter 1 - When he comes...
Chapter 1 - When he comes...
He's the object of my dreams,
Yet your the happiness in my thoughts,
He's the pain i'm addicted to,
Your the one who makes me forget...
What am I supposed to do,
When I'm split into 2,
Would u leave me here to cry?
Or would u fight me to choose?
Ive found the poison in my mind,
I just wanna be friends but he makes me want more...
I cant forget u...
When I think about him i wanna shout and run in happiness,
but then i remember about all this sadness,
So i need u to let me kno,
Which way do YOU want me to go?
__________________________________________
Mark is the "he"
Andrew is the "u"
Sorry bout my sucky poems...
Yet your the happiness in my thoughts,
He's the pain i'm addicted to,
Your the one who makes me forget...
What am I supposed to do,
When I'm split into 2,
Would u leave me here to cry?
Or would u fight me to choose?
Ive found the poison in my mind,
I just wanna be friends but he makes me want more...
I cant forget u...
When I think about him i wanna shout and run in happiness,
but then i remember about all this sadness,
So i need u to let me kno,
Which way do YOU want me to go?
__________________________________________
Mark is the "he"
Andrew is the "u"
Sorry bout my sucky poems...
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sonicfangirl on July 13, 2005, 8:00:45 AM
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SUCKY,SUCKY no way your poems are AWSOMExSlipknotMunkEEx on September 13, 2004, 6:17:34 AM
wouldnt let me add my comment! it was to long :-(I NEED TO TALK TO JOHN I LOVE HIM WOOHOO! lol x-cuse that but anyways i think that dude you like should go out with him you ppl can hang out together and sit next to each other while their not around anyways why would they get mad? are his parents and your enemys? lol jw....... ^.^ but still..yea the fact that you 13....hhhmmmmm takes that out of my mind........i need to think about things first! lol well anyways maybe your parents will give you freedom once you turn 13 maybe? my mom did but anyways ive had alot of boifriends even when i was 9.....so =X blah i just noticed how nice my parents are to me.,....o wait! nvm they didnt know...what ever happened to the fact that when little ppl kissed it was cute?!!?!?!? hunhunhun?!!?!?! that sux :-( lol :inside conversation with self: wow i wrote alot i bet you got tired of listen to my crap.....^.^ well bye and thanx! :Favs this poem: forgot if i sed that or not...xSlipknotMunkEEx on September 13, 2004, 6:16:58 AM
THATS AWSOME! hehehe thank you for all you wonderful comments :-) im sorry about his stupid parnets....:-(........I KNOW!!!! LETS GO TAKE OVER THEIR MINDS WITH MY EVIL DOOMSDAYKILLMYPARNETDEVICER-R-R-R-R! lol if only i could image-e-e-e-e--e-ee-e-e-e-nn-n-n-n-nnn lol x-cuse my typig :-) I love john!!! hehehe ask me anything you want about him i dont mind :-) im sorta an open book in a way hmmmm i guess? lol ^.^ well not really not at skool i am on the internet bcuz no really knows me and they cant look at me and just straight out and say im somthing im not..... :-P hehe im glad you liked the pic. i drew for you! and the poem that nick wrote yea i use to go out with him.....but there was just somthing about him missing when i went out with him i liked him alot more as a friend but still i stilllove him either way :-) and i got john im happy i have him! im surprised he would still go out with me V.v bcuz of what i did to him......im so mean :-(......i wish i would have never done it......ok now i feel bad..he dosent deserve me...... :::Sigh:::......now what...................^.v eheheheh....i need more candy hyperness lowering lower lower lower..............eeeeeeehhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooty on September 12, 2004, 8:32:41 PM
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Awsome poem!!!(adds to favs)DylanSanders959 on September 12, 2004, 5:45:12 PM
THIS IS NOT SUCKY !!!! IT's GROOVY !!!!*adds ur poem and butterflies 2 favs*(just wondered if you cud read any of my stories if not o.k !!!!!!!!