Chapter 1 - Enter "Rae of Light!"
Submitted January 6, 2011 Updated January 4, 2013 Status Incomplete | When young Rachael finds a Rainbow Charm in the river one day, she earns the power of a Light Sorceress. *Based on dreams I had recently. For 10+ for mild swearing, violence, and blood.
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Chapter 1 - Enter "Rae of Light!"
Chapter 1 - Enter "Rae of Light!"
At the river...
Rachael: *panting* I made it! *takes her shoes off* Hmm... *puts her foot in the water* Perfect!!
About (what seems to be) ten minutes later...
Rachael: *squealing in joy and running around in the water*
*something sparkles in the water*
Rachael: Oh? *picks up the object* A necklace? *puts the necklace on*
Necklace (Rainbow Charm): *glows, and lets Rachael transform*
Wand (Light Septor): *appears, and Rachael grabs it*
Rachael: Holy... *looks around her* HOLY CRAP!! 8D
Voice: Second Light Sorceress...
Rachael: ?!
Voice: ...Come.
Rachael: *vanishes*
(about) Fifteen minutes later
Queen Hikari (Voice from earlier): You are... Rae of Light!
Rachael: "Rae of Light...?"
Queen Hikari: Yes, Rachael-san.
Rachael: It was nice to meet you, Hikari-sama! Oh, and what's that horse for?
Queen Hikari: It's in case we do cloning.
Rachael: Orly?
Queen Hikari: Yes...
Rachael: Bye! *runs off*
Rara: *flies next to Rachael*
Prince: Hey, mom, are we going to do cloning?
Queen Hikari: Yes, young prince.
Prince: That girl... Hikari no Reichiiru (Rachael of Light)... is so beautiful...
Rachael: *panting* I made it! *takes her shoes off* Hmm... *puts her foot in the water* Perfect!!
About (what seems to be) ten minutes later...
Rachael: *squealing in joy and running around in the water*
*something sparkles in the water*
Rachael: Oh? *picks up the object* A necklace? *puts the necklace on*
Necklace (Rainbow Charm): *glows, and lets Rachael transform*
Wand (Light Septor): *appears, and Rachael grabs it*
Rachael: Holy... *looks around her* HOLY CRAP!! 8D
Voice: Second Light Sorceress...
Rachael: ?!
Voice: ...Come.
Rachael: *vanishes*
(about) Fifteen minutes later
Queen Hikari (Voice from earlier): You are... Rae of Light!
Rachael: "Rae of Light...?"
Queen Hikari: Yes, Rachael-san.
Rachael: It was nice to meet you, Hikari-sama! Oh, and what's that horse for?
Queen Hikari: It's in case we do cloning.
Rachael: Orly?
Queen Hikari: Yes...
Rachael: Bye! *runs off*
Rara: *flies next to Rachael*
Prince: Hey, mom, are we going to do cloning?
Queen Hikari: Yes, young prince.
Prince: That girl... Hikari no Reichiiru (Rachael of Light)... is so beautiful...
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Anime_Ellie on January 7, 2011, 9:05:26 AM
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:D Awesome so far! XDwaluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:36:03 AM
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OMG I'm in this one!! :DCreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:39:33 AM
That's what I like to do: foreshadowing. ｜3waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:40:51 AM
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Foreshadowing's awesome! :DCreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:44:05 AM
Plus, there'll be a song called "A Love we Never Knew" from Pop'n Music... search it on YouTube. It's epic. 8Dwaluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:46:19 AM
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I sure will :D(I have a feeling that song is in the story X3)
CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:57:37 AM
It is X3waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:58:55 AM
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Heard it ;) <3CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 10:57:12 AM
Did you like it? XDwaluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 11:22:57 AM
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It's really cute! :D