Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the Dream
Submitted July 26, 2011 Updated August 28, 2011 Status Incomplete | It's based on a dream I had recently... well, three of them. Apologies to Kewi, Janetta, Ellie, and Reimu. You weren't in this dream... I hope you guys will be in the next one! For 12+, just in case
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Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the Dream
Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the Dream
Dad: Be sure not to get lost. You have my number in the communicator if you need me.
Rachael: Okay! Byyye!! *walks out of the house*
Hi, my name's Rachael. I'm starting a journey to help people because I want to be a hero. You know.. like Klonoa?
Rachael: *sees a cave* I don't remember the cave... But, oh well! *walks in the cave*
The cave had three paths- One was lit in orange, another had purple lights, and the last one shined yellow. I got scared and confused, so I ended up running a different direction.
Then, I see a room with a blue ceiling, blue walls, and a gray carpeted floor.
Rachael: Huh? Is this a school?
Girl: No, you're in a hotel. How'd ya end up here?
Rachael: *gasps and notices doors on some of the walls* Omigosh! Check-in direction?
Girl: *points to the right*
Rachael: Thanks! *runs toward that direction*
It took me about 15 minutes, but I finally found the Check-in. I then got my room key, which tempted me into running to the room number I have- 166.
I opened the door. It was like an ordinary hotel room, except there was a Wii and some sweets! The window had a beautiful view-- a river and some trees.
Rachael: It's awesome here! Omigosh, they have caramels, too!! *runs to the candies and eats one* Omigawd... Scotchmallow... (it's a caramel and marshmallow candy from See's)
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So, yeah. That's chapter one. Hope you enjoyed! I'll try to post chapter two today, too! :D
Rachael: Okay! Byyye!! *walks out of the house*
Hi, my name's Rachael. I'm starting a journey to help people because I want to be a hero. You know.. like Klonoa?
Rachael: *sees a cave* I don't remember the cave... But, oh well! *walks in the cave*
The cave had three paths- One was lit in orange, another had purple lights, and the last one shined yellow. I got scared and confused, so I ended up running a different direction.
Then, I see a room with a blue ceiling, blue walls, and a gray carpeted floor.
Rachael: Huh? Is this a school?
Girl: No, you're in a hotel. How'd ya end up here?
Rachael: *gasps and notices doors on some of the walls* Omigosh! Check-in direction?
Girl: *points to the right*
Rachael: Thanks! *runs toward that direction*
It took me about 15 minutes, but I finally found the Check-in. I then got my room key, which tempted me into running to the room number I have- 166.
I opened the door. It was like an ordinary hotel room, except there was a Wii and some sweets! The window had a beautiful view-- a river and some trees.
Rachael: It's awesome here! Omigosh, they have caramels, too!! *runs to the candies and eats one* Omigawd... Scotchmallow... (it's a caramel and marshmallow candy from See's)
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So, yeah. That's chapter one. Hope you enjoyed! I'll try to post chapter two today, too! :D
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Anime_Ellie on July 27, 2011, 9:55:27 AM
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Cool! oh, and it's alright that we're not in it. (and sorry about not being on much-- I kept forgetting to log in.)waluigiguy22 on July 26, 2011, 5:27:53 AM
waluigiguy22 on
This is good do far :DEpic :D
CreamandPoppufan166 on July 26, 2011, 5:31:22 AM
Thanks ^^