Chapter 1 - My daydreams (humans)
Submitted April 3, 2004 Updated July 18, 2004 Status Incomplete | since i can't make pictures currently (even though i stink at drawing -_-') I will make a book of poems this will get to be a big book 0.0
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Chapter 1 - My daydreams (humans)
Chapter 1 - My daydreams (humans)
As I sit in my room
I dream of good and of doom
I see the things that wonder me
I see the things deep in the sea
I see the sorrow in the world
I see the brightness in boys and girls
How humans can be good or bad
How humans can be sad or glad
When the children come out to play
I see the darkness&greatness in their day
Humans are so very strange
I just can't conprehend their ways
So when I'm sitting in my room
I think of humans good or of doom
I hope some day they'll understand
Their's noone giving them commands
So don't be shy to speak up my child
What you think is quite worth while
For people have not yet agreed
But i think they're all in need
Of peace and love and tenderness
Please give it to them
Because then in my eyes
Your the best
I dream of good and of doom
I see the things that wonder me
I see the things deep in the sea
I see the sorrow in the world
I see the brightness in boys and girls
How humans can be good or bad
How humans can be sad or glad
When the children come out to play
I see the darkness&greatness in their day
Humans are so very strange
I just can't conprehend their ways
So when I'm sitting in my room
I think of humans good or of doom
I hope some day they'll understand
Their's noone giving them commands
So don't be shy to speak up my child
What you think is quite worth while
For people have not yet agreed
But i think they're all in need
Of peace and love and tenderness
Please give it to them
Because then in my eyes
Your the best
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Rukira on April 27, 2004, 8:19:00 AM
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duuude... Thats great! I really like it! I agree too... nice moral x3GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:09:37 AM
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i wuv it dawn...u write great poems *huggies* ((don't ask y i hugged u...i dunno))YAY ((don't ask about that either))ShadowSquall6789 on April 7, 2004, 5:47:35 AM
ur poems have such poetry jus ignore wat i said
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 5, 2004, 5:18:04 AM
just got on :P and look at it and yay i wuv your poems ^^DarkDusk on April 5, 2004, 4:39:19 AM
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*hugglez* when did you get on to read this thanks Nay!lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 4, 2004, 12:49:21 PM
AW i wuv it sun ^^