Chapter 9 - Upon A Mountain
Submitted April 3, 2004 Updated July 18, 2004 Status Incomplete | since i can't make pictures currently (even though i stink at drawing -_-') I will make a book of poems this will get to be a big book 0.0
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Chapter 9 - Upon A Mountain
Chapter 9 - Upon A Mountain
Yeah I went camping in the mountains a while ago, and I went hiking and climbed four waterfalls YAY! Well here is a poems I thought of. ^^
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I'm in the mountains
And I feel so strange
Like I'm being contained
I've always been afraid of heights
But I don't think that's the same
I can't believe I was born in the mountains
And I'm still afraid of heights
Perhaps it's just all the things
That used to give me the frights
I was tortured with noone to take care
But my sister who was five
My father didn't care a bit
And I was left to die
My life is horrible just because
Of those days in misery
And now I'm on a mountaintop
Feeling the pain only I can see
Please let me down on flat ground
So it will be peaceful again
I'm shaking and shouting
Not knowing what to do
I need a savoir please help me
I'm shaking in my shoes
I'm falling down
I'm dieing soon
I need some help won't you
I can't breathe in the mountains
Just let me breathe again
I'm trying to fall asleep
But it's to cold up here
Just stop it all
To this place I'll never come near
I hate the mountains
I hate the thoughts
Just someone untangle all the knots
Set me free and let me be
So I can go where I belong
And just be me
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I'm in the mountains
And I feel so strange
Like I'm being contained
I've always been afraid of heights
But I don't think that's the same
I can't believe I was born in the mountains
And I'm still afraid of heights
Perhaps it's just all the things
That used to give me the frights
I was tortured with noone to take care
But my sister who was five
My father didn't care a bit
And I was left to die
My life is horrible just because
Of those days in misery
And now I'm on a mountaintop
Feeling the pain only I can see
Please let me down on flat ground
So it will be peaceful again
I'm shaking and shouting
Not knowing what to do
I need a savoir please help me
I'm shaking in my shoes
I'm falling down
I'm dieing soon
I need some help won't you
I can't breathe in the mountains
Just let me breathe again
I'm trying to fall asleep
But it's to cold up here
Just stop it all
To this place I'll never come near
I hate the mountains
I hate the thoughts
Just someone untangle all the knots
Set me free and let me be
So I can go where I belong
And just be me
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ShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:04:36 AM
yea so dats where ur eccentricness(a word u most likely dont kno) comes fromDarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:11:41 AM
DarkDusk on
yes I was born in da mountains YAY! for some reason I brag about it kinda strange ya'? kinda strangeShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 8:38:39 AM
born in da mountains eh?watever i like dis poem
DarkDusk on April 23, 2004, 9:06:42 AM
DarkDusk on
Yes *pokes brother* Go write your own Danm Poems! :X oops what the lorax? I think I might read that book "I am the lorax I speak for the trees I speak for the trees for the trees have no tongues And I'm asking you sir at the top of my lungs" such a kind lorax and I hate that stupid once-ler at least her learned his lesson at the end oh what sure I'll do your stupid poem for science ^^ so easily persauded! ^^lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 23, 2004, 8:18:47 AM
yesh ^_^ you are da almighty mountain ruler!!!!!!^^ weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ....oh yea..... awesom poem as always.... o and tell ur brother to wrght his own poems! ^^ Ta-Ta *poof*DarkDusk on April 22, 2004, 12:18:35 PM
DarkDusk on
Yeah most people don't believe me when I say I was born in the mountains actually after camping up there and hiking I love mountains I feel one with it..... I was born on top a mountain and therefore bound to it ahhhhh so...poetic!GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:33:32 AM
GCrocker949 on
AWWW...i'll help u *huggieness* it's ok...yea...that's right...u were born in the mountains.... nay told me....kool....so...yea