Chapter 1 - !The Stolen Balloon!
Submitted January 24, 2005 Updated January 30, 2005 Status Incomplete | Starring: Kristin Cat (me), Amanda Hedgehog (orchid), Nick Hedgehog (Master_Tails) & Jack Echidna (Knux13). All about adventures that we all end up in. If you don't like it... TOO BAD!!! *Kinda relates to Spongebob*
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Chapter 1 - !The Stolen Balloon!
Chapter 1 - !The Stolen Balloon!
One day, I was walking down my street. I saw my friend Amanda the Fox.
Kristin (cat): Hi, Amanda!!!
She looked at me.
Amanda: Hi, Kristin!!!
We ran to each other. Stupidly, we crashed!
K & A: OUCH!!!
Amanda: Well that was stupid!
Kristin: I know! What were we thinking?
Amanda: What do you want to do today?
Kristin: I don’t know? What do you want to do today?
Amanda: I don’t know? What do you want to do today?
Kristin: GASP!!! (I got an idea!) I know what I want to do today! (I see some balloons.) I need some money!
I checked my pockets, but I’m broke. ‘Cause I’m a lazy bum!
Kristin: I don’t have any money. Amanda! I want a balloon really really badly! REALLY REALLY BADLY!!!
???: That’s okay. You can have mine!
Some echidna gives me a red balloon!
Kristin: Uh...thanks! Who are you?
???: My name’s Knux13.
Amanda: Knux13? Are you a fan of Knuckles?
???: Yes, but you can call me... Jack!!! Mwa ha ha ha!!!!!
We stared at him. We didn’t find it very funny.
Kristin: Nice to meet you! Do you have any friends?
Jack: Yeah. He’s over there! (He pointed to a dude staring at Rouge!)
Amanda: Isn’t that Nick?
Kristin: Yeah! Your friends with Nick (Master_Tails)???
Jack: Uh huh. Are you 2 friends with him?
(I don’t know if your really! Just made it up!)
K & A: (We pretended) NO!
Jack: Maybe we better go help him. He’s in one of those modes!
Amanda: What do you mean?
We all looked at him. He was in a trance!
Nick: Rouge........ Rouge........ Rouge.........
K & A: Oh!
We all walked over to help him. Jack grabbed Nick (hedgehog) by the arm and pulled him away.
Nick: NNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amanda: Get a hold of yourself! (She slaps him!)
Nick: Rouge...... (SLAP) Rouge..... (SLAP) Rouge...... (SLAP)
Jack: Should we stop this?
Kristin: No, I’m enjoying it!
Jack: Your weird for a girl...
I look at him and growl..... (SLAP!!!)
Jack: Ouch!!!
Moments later, Nick’s face is all red!
Nick: (Wakes up from trance) Whoa, what am I doing here? Was I doing something Rouge related???
K & A & J: YES!!!
After we scream, my balloon pops!
Jack: Oh man! I stole that balloon!
Amanda: You did!?!
Kristin: Oh no he didn’t!
Kristin looks at a sign.
Kristin: But it’s Free Bal....
Amanda: We’re not talking about some hijacking or some mail fraud scheme... JACK STOLE A BALLOON!!!
Jack: Isn’t it supposed to be, “We stole a balloon�?!
Kristin: No, you did it!
Amanda: Okay, act normal...
Nick: I have no idea what’s going on!
Nick & Kristin just go home! Amanda & Jack start acting all weird! They run away!!!
Amanda: We’re wanted... animals! Will spend the rest of our lives running!
Jack: I’m hungry!
Amanda: Look what I got!!! (She grabs two candy bars off a cart that mysteriously appeared!)
Jack: RECTANGLES!!!
Amanda: Not just rectangles, candy bars! (Gives candy bar to him.)
Jack: I think I’ll eat it now! (Eats candy bar.)
Jack:(Stupidly) I think I’ll eat it now! (Bites hand by mistake!) OW! Huh? (Sees his candy bar is gone!) Where’d my candy bar go???
Amanda: You just ate it stupid!
Jack: Oh!
(Lets go back to Nick & Kristin!)
Walking on their way homes.
Kristin: What do you think those idiots are doing?
Nick is staring at a picture of Rouge
Nick: Huh? What?
Kristin: Give me that! (I take the picture and rip it in pieces!) Do you pay attention to anything anybody else says?
Nick: Hmm....nope! Pretty much, no!
Kristin: Typical! (Rolls eyes) Do you do anything but stare at anything with Rouge on it?
Nick: Nope!
Kristin: It’s amazing you don’t think anyone else is cute... :/
(Back to Amanda & Jack!)
Amanda: What am I doing here with you? I’m telling on you!
Jack: Not if I tell first! (Runs!)
Amanda: I’ll beat you there! (Runs too!)
Amanda & Jack run like crazy!!! They reach Police Station 20 seconds later... (they ran really fast!) Talk to police guy!
A & J: Balloon.....POP...Boom! He did it.... I gave it.... whatever....blah!
Police guy: Okay.... Come here!
A & J: What are you going to do to us?!!?
Police Guy: Just follow me PUNKS!!!
Leads them to cell.
Police Guy: If you can’t do the crime, don’t do the... you know the rest!
They get in the cell, police dude closes the door... but opens it back open!
Police Guy: Okay, your done. GO AWAY!!!
Kicks them out!
Amanda: WAIT!!! We’re supposed to get lollipops!
Police Guy: Oh yeah! (Gives them lollipop sticks!)
Jack: All right, which one of you flat... people.....ate our suckers?!?
Police Guy: I did! I was hungry...
Back to Kristin & Nick...
Kristin: Nick... what are you doing...
Kristin notices him looking at a picture of Rouge.
Nick: Nothing! (He hides it)
Kristin: I saw that! (Kristin got an idea how to drive him crazy!)
Kristin: Kiss me, you fool!!! (She grabs Nick)
Nick: CRAZY WOMEN!!!!! AAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Then Rouge notices...
Rouge: Aww.... and I was starting to like him too!
!THE END! (Until the next chapter...)
Kristin (cat): Hi, Amanda!!!
She looked at me.
Amanda: Hi, Kristin!!!
We ran to each other. Stupidly, we crashed!
K & A: OUCH!!!
Amanda: Well that was stupid!
Kristin: I know! What were we thinking?
Amanda: What do you want to do today?
Kristin: I don’t know? What do you want to do today?
Amanda: I don’t know? What do you want to do today?
Kristin: GASP!!! (I got an idea!) I know what I want to do today! (I see some balloons.) I need some money!
I checked my pockets, but I’m broke. ‘Cause I’m a lazy bum!
Kristin: I don’t have any money. Amanda! I want a balloon really really badly! REALLY REALLY BADLY!!!
???: That’s okay. You can have mine!
Some echidna gives me a red balloon!
Kristin: Uh...thanks! Who are you?
???: My name’s Knux13.
Amanda: Knux13? Are you a fan of Knuckles?
???: Yes, but you can call me... Jack!!! Mwa ha ha ha!!!!!
We stared at him. We didn’t find it very funny.
Kristin: Nice to meet you! Do you have any friends?
Jack: Yeah. He’s over there! (He pointed to a dude staring at Rouge!)
Amanda: Isn’t that Nick?
Kristin: Yeah! Your friends with Nick (Master_Tails)???
Jack: Uh huh. Are you 2 friends with him?
(I don’t know if your really! Just made it up!)
K & A: (We pretended) NO!
Jack: Maybe we better go help him. He’s in one of those modes!
Amanda: What do you mean?
We all looked at him. He was in a trance!
Nick: Rouge........ Rouge........ Rouge.........
K & A: Oh!
We all walked over to help him. Jack grabbed Nick (hedgehog) by the arm and pulled him away.
Nick: NNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amanda: Get a hold of yourself! (She slaps him!)
Nick: Rouge...... (SLAP) Rouge..... (SLAP) Rouge...... (SLAP)
Jack: Should we stop this?
Kristin: No, I’m enjoying it!
Jack: Your weird for a girl...
I look at him and growl..... (SLAP!!!)
Jack: Ouch!!!
Moments later, Nick’s face is all red!
Nick: (Wakes up from trance) Whoa, what am I doing here? Was I doing something Rouge related???
K & A & J: YES!!!
After we scream, my balloon pops!
Jack: Oh man! I stole that balloon!
Amanda: You did!?!
Kristin: Oh no he didn’t!
Kristin looks at a sign.
Kristin: But it’s Free Bal....
Amanda: We’re not talking about some hijacking or some mail fraud scheme... JACK STOLE A BALLOON!!!
Jack: Isn’t it supposed to be, “We stole a balloon�?!
Kristin: No, you did it!
Amanda: Okay, act normal...
Nick: I have no idea what’s going on!
Nick & Kristin just go home! Amanda & Jack start acting all weird! They run away!!!
Amanda: We’re wanted... animals! Will spend the rest of our lives running!
Jack: I’m hungry!
Amanda: Look what I got!!! (She grabs two candy bars off a cart that mysteriously appeared!)
Jack: RECTANGLES!!!
Amanda: Not just rectangles, candy bars! (Gives candy bar to him.)
Jack: I think I’ll eat it now! (Eats candy bar.)
Jack:(Stupidly) I think I’ll eat it now! (Bites hand by mistake!) OW! Huh? (Sees his candy bar is gone!) Where’d my candy bar go???
Amanda: You just ate it stupid!
Jack: Oh!
(Lets go back to Nick & Kristin!)
Walking on their way homes.
Kristin: What do you think those idiots are doing?
Nick is staring at a picture of Rouge
Nick: Huh? What?
Kristin: Give me that! (I take the picture and rip it in pieces!) Do you pay attention to anything anybody else says?
Nick: Hmm....nope! Pretty much, no!
Kristin: Typical! (Rolls eyes) Do you do anything but stare at anything with Rouge on it?
Nick: Nope!
Kristin: It’s amazing you don’t think anyone else is cute... :/
(Back to Amanda & Jack!)
Amanda: What am I doing here with you? I’m telling on you!
Jack: Not if I tell first! (Runs!)
Amanda: I’ll beat you there! (Runs too!)
Amanda & Jack run like crazy!!! They reach Police Station 20 seconds later... (they ran really fast!) Talk to police guy!
A & J: Balloon.....POP...Boom! He did it.... I gave it.... whatever....blah!
Police guy: Okay.... Come here!
A & J: What are you going to do to us?!!?
Police Guy: Just follow me PUNKS!!!
Leads them to cell.
Police Guy: If you can’t do the crime, don’t do the... you know the rest!
They get in the cell, police dude closes the door... but opens it back open!
Police Guy: Okay, your done. GO AWAY!!!
Kicks them out!
Amanda: WAIT!!! We’re supposed to get lollipops!
Police Guy: Oh yeah! (Gives them lollipop sticks!)
Jack: All right, which one of you flat... people.....ate our suckers?!?
Police Guy: I did! I was hungry...
Back to Kristin & Nick...
Kristin: Nick... what are you doing...
Kristin notices him looking at a picture of Rouge.
Nick: Nothing! (He hides it)
Kristin: I saw that! (Kristin got an idea how to drive him crazy!)
Kristin: Kiss me, you fool!!! (She grabs Nick)
Nick: CRAZY WOMEN!!!!! AAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Then Rouge notices...
Rouge: Aww.... and I was starting to like him too!
!THE END! (Until the next chapter...)
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Master_Tails on January 26, 2005, 11:00:14 AM
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orchid on January 26, 2005, 10:37:23 AM
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knux13 on January 25, 2005, 12:57:48 AM
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DarkPeach on January 24, 2005, 12:25:23 PM
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THIS STORY KIX @$$!!!i like the ending..:)
im not really THAT obsessed with Rouge anymore...Rouge is more obsessed with me..anyway..you rule..*favs to stroy*