Chapter 1 - Life
Submitted November 28, 2003 Updated November 28, 2003 Status Incomplete | its a peom i did when i was 14,its about how everything has a bad side to it
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Chapter 1 - Life
Chapter 1 - Life
I heard it took 7 days for the world to begin
So shouldnt it take 7 days to end
It is Life
That brings Death
It is one persons joy
That brings another persons sorrow
It is in death
That we see the truth
*i wrote this poem when i was 14,its about how i dont belive in God*
So shouldnt it take 7 days to end
It is Life
That brings Death
It is one persons joy
That brings another persons sorrow
It is in death
That we see the truth
*i wrote this poem when i was 14,its about how i dont belive in God*
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Archie on June 6, 2008, 11:50:53 AM
Archie on
well, it's a thoughtful poem, but you can reverse everything in it, to make everything have good in it too. just a thought...redwerecat on March 12, 2007, 11:22:34 PM
redwerecat on
well, this is interesting...uh. It's very evocative of a 14-year-old's thoughts...but it isn't all that bad.
(Said from my lofty position of 17.5)
sweetblood on February 24, 2004, 1:43:54 PM
sweetblood on
This is how I think right now and "shock shock" i'm 14! How amazing...Alearea on December 11, 2003, 3:04:09 PM
Alearea on
I thought it only fair to comment on your work because you commented on mine. I like this poem, it features how I thought at 14.