Chapter 1 - one-the way it is
Submitted February 5, 2006 Updated February 5, 2006 Status Incomplete | Another poem I did about A girl, a pasor/solder, and a candle. Comments please and I take requests. Froze8
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Chapter 1 - one-the way it is
Chapter 1 - one-the way it is
A Girl A Girl
A girl standing there with a candle held high, her hand wasblocking the wind from blowing the candle out. When holding the candle she wasreminded of her pastor (Rob Haynes), who was in the war. Reminded of how thefire was like him and the wind was like the people against him who where tryingto put him out. Then, she thought about how her handwas blocking the wind, just like God's hand was doing. After thinking thosethoughts she knew God would keep her pastor safe during the war. Just so youknow that girl was me.
By Froze8
A girl standing there with a candle held high, her hand wasblocking the wind from blowing the candle out. When holding the candle she wasreminded of her pastor (Rob Haynes), who was in the war. Reminded of how thefire was like him and the wind was like the people against him who where tryingto put him out. Then, she thought about how her handwas blocking the wind, just like God's hand was doing. After thinking thosethoughts she knew God would keep her pastor safe during the war. Just so youknow that girl was me.
By Froze8
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Code_Earth on March 21, 2006, 5:05:04 AM
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Great poem Froze8Froze8 on February 22, 2006, 5:19:17 AM
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I don't know?Froze8
cyborggirl on February 22, 2006, 5:10:48 AM
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WoW...how come only one rabbi had a amazing war story....well whatever great poem...favs!