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Chapter 1 - Untitled

A poem that I wrote at 10:00. I got bored so I wrote this up.

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


Come sail to my heart

Till death do we part

A garden of sorrow

Shall bloom here tomorrow

Hold on my love

We are like a flying dove

Soaring high into the open blue

Trying to prove our love is true

Their words must not put us down

They must not make us feel like a clown

We shall not let them give us shame

We shall run away from all the pain

I will always be on your side

We must be brave we cannot cry

I never had said

I wanted anyone dead

But that's how it turned out

And we cant live in doubt

We know it is here

We can't live in fear

We are going to turn ourselves in

You think it is over, but it is yet to begin.

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AddictedFreak on January 16, 2006, 12:22:28 PM

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AddictedFreakBeautiful

FrozenPirate on August 16, 2005, 6:34:36 AM

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FrozenPirateXD Thanks for the comment

AnimeFan95 on August 15, 2005, 8:10:11 AM

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AnimeFan95me: so *sniff* beautiful *sniff* i love it *sniff*
ditto: WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *sniff sniff*
stephan: yuck it's all gushy!
me: *sniff* stephan stop being so mean! now back to the poem! um... FrozenPirate will you be my friend!
ditto: comment her on her profile please!
me: *glomps* you are so good at ryming
stephan: yeah animefan has troubles with ryming stuff
me: yesh i do.....

FrozenPirate on May 27, 2005, 1:49:55 PM

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FrozenPiratethanks so much!

tenchimuyorocks on May 27, 2005, 1:22:13 PM

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tenchimuyorocksso touching tears to my eyes ^-^


this would make a great wedding poam

Silvanis on March 30, 2005, 1:34:47 AM

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SilvanisOnce again Frozen, fantastic job! *sniffle* Thanx for being a good friend to me. I must say goodbye now. I'm moving to another site. Best wishes! Keep writing. *howls*

FrozenPirate on March 17, 2005, 8:20:19 PM

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FrozenPirateThx again Terra! ^_^

The_Vampire_Queen on March 17, 2005, 12:22:17 PM

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The_Vampire_QueenAwesome poem! ^_________^ Good job!

FrozenPirate on March 17, 2005, 7:23:56 AM

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FrozenPiratethanks

CherryBlossom on March 17, 2005, 12:44:11 AM

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CherryBlossomvery beautiful poem ^__^