Sworn enemies
Submitted August 19, 2007 Updated January 2, 2008 Status Complete | Kevin 11 returns from the Null Void and takes a vengeance on the Tennysons. The story continues in the future. Can Ben 5 000 stop him? Read, and find out the details! |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: August 19, 2007 • Updated: August 19, 2007
Word count: 747 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 400
Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
Word count: 1118 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 356
Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: October 11, 2007 • Updated: October 11, 2007
Word count: 1668 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 352
Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 1484 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 338
Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: October 22, 2007 • Updated: October 22, 2007
Word count: 1446 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 308
Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
Submitted: October 22, 2007 • Updated: October 22, 2007
Word count: 868 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 349
Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
Submitted: October 23, 2007 • Updated: October 23, 2007
Word count: 544 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 320
Chapter 8 - Chapter 8
Submitted: October 24, 2007 • Updated: October 24, 2007
Word count: 2259 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 348
Chapter 9 - Chapter 9
Submitted: October 26, 2007 • Updated: October 26, 2007
Word count: 1689 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 356
Chapter 10 - Chapter 10
Submitted: November 2, 2007 • Updated: November 2, 2007
Word count: 2059 • Size: 11k • Comments: 3 • views: 398
Chapter 11 - Chapter 11
Submitted: November 4, 2007 • Updated: November 4, 2007
Word count: 1404 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 355
Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
Submitted: November 7, 2007 • Updated: November 7, 2007
Word count: 2372 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 359
Chapter 13 - Chapter 13
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 939 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 348
Chapter 14 - Chapter 14
Submitted: November 14, 2007 • Updated: November 14, 2007
Word count: 1793 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 372
Chapter 15 - Chapter 15
Submitted: December 5, 2007 • Updated: December 5, 2007
Word count: 3228 • Size: 17k • Comments: 5 • views: 315
Chapter 16 - Chapter 16
Submitted: January 1, 2008 • Updated: January 1, 2008
Word count: 5634 • Size: 31k • Comments: 6 • views: 394
Chapter 17 - Chapter 17
Submitted: January 1, 2008 • Updated: January 2, 2008
Word count: 543 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 304
Chapter 18 - Chapter 18
Submitted: January 2, 2008 • Updated: January 2, 2008
Word count: 675 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 303
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Devon11 on September 20, 2008, 6:39:19 AM
thanks s bunchDevon11 on September 19, 2008, 8:12:04 AM
oh, i remember that episode i just couldn't really visualize the three headed KevinGee on September 19, 2008, 9:55:22 AM
Ok, i will draw a sketch of him as soon as i have a little free time...Devon11 on September 18, 2008, 7:58:07 AM
can u try drawing a pic of Ben in al of the alien forms I can't quite get it was it how Kevin looked when he was 11 or is it differentGee on September 19, 2008, 3:59:32 AM
I don't know if you have seen those episodes, from the 2nd season after Kevin absorbed the omnitrix's energy and eventually could not handle it, and he became an amalgam of the original 10 omnitrix alien. That means he had Fourarm's torso, Stinkfly's wings, Diamondhead's right arm, Heatblast's lft arm, Xlr8's tail, his back is like Upgrade and he has Grey Matter's right eye... oh and has two Wildmutt arms as well... and that glowing thingy of Ripjaws... I did not modified that one, but I'll draw a pic of Kevin's alien form, that's much different, like he has three heads...Devon11 on September 18, 2008, 8:02:45 AM
HHHHAWSOME!!!!Devon11 on September 18, 2008, 8:00:22 AM
AAAAW KEWT!!!!!! (CUTE)Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 2:01:53 PM
woah. The final battle of Ben and Kevin has just begun . . . . .very very good place to end the chapter!!!! This story is SO DRAMATIC!!!!!Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 1:47:52 PM
Ben was PISSED i mean come on violently stabbing diamondhead's crystals into Kevin's shoulder, "He is pissed," I stated slowly.
"Yes he is," Gee replied.
Sorry i had to get it out:-)
Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 1:22:12 PM
duh duh duh!!!!! (dramatic music)Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:42:07 PM
wow ben must be really distressed now leaving gwen like thatDevon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:38:43 PM
wow is all i can say i wanna cry but yet i don't want to . . . . . wierdDevon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:33:52 PM
. . . . KEvin killed Max, woah dude become an author, you'd make a Ton of money <:-( Max died.Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:22:59 PM
seriously become an author AND an artistDevon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:18:57 PM
you should become an aouthor, Gee you're RELAAY GOOD!!!!!ginathehedgehog on January 4, 2008, 1:00:56 AM
Wow, so awesome! Are you gonna make a second one too? I hope so! Anyway, really awesome story Gee! I loved it!ginathehedgehog on January 4, 2008, 12:57:23 AM
Awww, that was a cute chapter ^^cactar on January 3, 2008, 6:47:14 AM
This was one great story,Gee hope to see future stories,like one with GhostKevin.Gee on January 3, 2008, 11:45:01 PM
Thank you very much! It's good to hear that. I'm glad you find that way. Yes, I'm thinking about cintinuing this plotline, and I even have some ideas of a sequel or sequels, showing what Ben did in that eight years away from Earth.;Dcactar on January 3, 2008, 6:39:15 AM
the names of the aliens are Benviktor and Benmummy i think but wat ever you want.Gee on January 3, 2008, 11:43:05 PM
Yes, I know, but only the cartoon's creators named those aliens, Ben himself didn't, so I changed their names, to fit in more...;Dcactar on January 5, 2008, 3:29:40 AM
oh,I see.ginathehedgehog on January 1, 2008, 12:00:11 PM
Awesome chapter Gee! The fight was so intense! I can't wait to see what Ben has to do next ^^Gee on January 1, 2008, 1:36:17 PM
You will.;D I'm planning to write one or maximum two more chapters, but they will be shorter ones.;Dginathehedgehog on January 1, 2008, 1:38:51 PM
Awesome! Can't wait to read them! =Dginathehedgehog on December 6, 2007, 2:25:55 AM
Wow, awesome chapter! I can't wait for more!Gee on December 6, 2007, 5:53:44 AM
Thank you!;Dcactar on December 5, 2007, 9:18:51 AM
can't wait 4 more!!!Gee on December 5, 2007, 9:31:38 AM
Thanks!;DI've recognized I've mistyped alot of words, I've already corrected them.;D
cactar on November 16, 2007, 10:02:26 PM
Woah Ben was reeeeely mad.can't wait 4 more!
ginathehedgehog on November 16, 2007, 7:06:10 PM
Awesome! I wander who was kidnapped? Can't wait for more!ginathehedgehog on November 16, 2007, 6:55:24 PM
Wow, cool! Can't wait for more!ginathehedgehog on November 16, 2007, 6:50:43 PM
Awesome chapter! I love the fight with Ghostfreak!ginathehedgehog on November 16, 2007, 6:38:42 PM
Cool chapter! Powersourse sounds cool! Keep it up! =Dcactar on November 12, 2007, 10:26:04 AM
Oh,no!!!!kevin!!!!
cactar on November 7, 2007, 7:02:07 AM
Can't wait for more!!!!Gee on November 10, 2007, 8:04:38 AM
thanks!;Dcactar on November 4, 2007, 10:10:32 AM
Shockwave...good alien!Nice chapter!
Gee on November 4, 2007, 10:51:17 AM
Thanks!:)cactar on November 4, 2007, 10:17:21 AM
Hope to see powersourse in a future chapter!Gee on November 4, 2007, 10:47:22 AM
You will:) I'm also planning to draw my aliens, so everyone can see, how I imagined them;D
ginathehedgehog on November 3, 2007, 3:16:59 AM
Wow, cool chapter! I hope Ben's ok!ginathehedgehog on November 1, 2007, 4:31:52 AM
wow, intense chapter! I can't wait for more!Gee on November 1, 2007, 6:06:07 AM
Thank you!;Dcactar on October 26, 2007, 6:33:28 AM
I like Spiderweb,good alien!wonder what happens next.
Gee on October 26, 2007, 11:05:21 PM
Thanks!;Dcactar on October 24, 2007, 9:28:23 AM
did you make up Brainstorm?Good chapter and i'm glad you accept my apologie!
ginathehedgehog on October 24, 2007, 5:25:38 AM
Wow, awesome chapter!ginathehedgehog on October 23, 2007, 6:58:48 AM
Cool chapter! Can't wait for more!Gee on October 24, 2007, 1:52:25 AM
thank ya!;Dcactar on October 23, 2007, 6:52:25 AM
Wonder where the're going.P.S. I'm realy sorry I killed Grandpa in mine. cuz it was coping you I'm soooooooooooooo sorry!!!1
Gee on October 24, 2007, 1:46:29 AM
no problem.;Dcactar on October 22, 2007, 9:09:50 AM
well that's good to know about the end and I think I know what happens.Intense chapter!
ginathehedgehog on October 22, 2007, 9:09:11 AM
Awesome chapter Gee! I can't wait for more =Dcactar on October 22, 2007, 9:04:35 AM
Can't believe Grandpa is dead...good fic chapter!
ginathehedgehog on October 22, 2007, 9:04:05 AM
Cool but sad chapter. hope they find Gwen soon ^^cactar on October 21, 2007, 1:50:31 AM
woah...:nice use of the alien names again;)
ginathehedgehog on October 20, 2007, 11:06:59 AM
Wow, tense chapter! I can't wait for more!cactar on October 13, 2007, 12:23:24 AM
finally another fan that knows th alien names!good fic!
ginathehedgehog on October 12, 2007, 6:04:58 AM
Wow, awesome new chapter! Lantara is awesome, much better than Ghostfreak! XD I can't wait for the next chapter! =Dginathehedgehog on August 31, 2007, 11:33:32 AM
Wow, that was so cool! Nice fighjting too, just like an actual episode! =D Can't wait for more!ginathehedgehog on August 26, 2007, 11:35:04 AM
wow, that was awesome! Can't wait for more!