Chapter 8 - Through Syrus's eyes
Submitted August 28, 2005 Updated February 6, 2006 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 8 - Through Syrus's eyes
Chapter 8 - Through Syrus's eyes
How can this be?
I've never lost a duel…
You were always there to watch me, to help me,
Why didn't you just tell me I'm not good enough Zane?
I always try to impress you and Jaden and Rose…
But I guess my best wasn't good enough for you.
I have Rose and Jaden to help when I fall,
But you just stand tall looking down on me.
What can I do to prove myself to you?
Am I not good enough to be known as your little brother?
You say I'm not good enough to be at this school,
But my friends say you're wrong.
Everyone has a right to do what they want,
Whether they're good at it or not.
Soon I'll be as good as you,
I won't forget you were the one that was wrong…
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totallyspies31 on March 4, 2006, 2:48:32 PM
Hiya. Just me. This was alright. I sort of suck at poetry, but this takes the cake. I never you did poems. I should've looked hard before. Maybe I can do something like this. Nah, I suck at poetry. Well, this and the others were good. I decided to read this one last. If you make a sequal, have Sasuke and Haku in it, and I will make mine Me, Jaden, Syrus and Zane. Maybe Blood. I dont know. If you are on, get a hold of me. Im on all night long. Night!!!!StoneColdRaven on November 14, 2005, 9:53:27 AM
SYRUS WHo???? I GUESS IT ISNT SPELLED LIKE IRIS.. THIS ONE HAS TRUE FEELINGS BEHIND IT DONT BE AFRAID TO SHOW THEM (FEELINGS) OR EVEN TO EXPAND ON THEM IN YOUR POETRY.