Chapter 1 - Brotherly discipline
Submitted December 20, 2005 Updated February 14, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is on FF.net too, but instead of making it three stories, I'm just gonna make it into one story with three chapters. So, this is weird, Sonic's acting like, making Manic consider using some...corporal punishment on his brother.
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Chapter 1 - Brotherly discipline
Chapter 1 - Brotherly discipline
Brotherly discipline
Manic-Oldest: he's more calm, crafty and mature
Sonia-Middle child: she likes the material possessions and attention
Sonic-Youngest: he's hyperactive and likes to have his own way all the time
Pretty valid reasons, don't you think? Its just a theory, its ok if you don't like it, I don't like Manic being the youngest either but I accept it. Anyway, this has non-sexual spanking in it, its more...corporal punishment in it. I'm thirteen and I got a fever right now, what do you want from me?
And oh yeah, I'm calling Robotnik; Eggman. He doesn't appear anyway.
The ride was full of annoyance and complaints "I can walk faster than this thing!...then again, I can do anything faster" Sonic grinned in a show-off way. Manic rolled his eyes with a groan, he'd been driving for five hours straight and during that time, all Sonic had done was complain, moan, nag and complain some more. He cast a glance to Sonia, she had the same expression on her face so obviously the feeling was mutual. Sonic groaned "Where are we goin' anyway?" he asked
"To the cell blocks in 'no mans land'. Its abandoned and I think we can use them for enemy spies" Sonia explained "I told you already!"
"Well, maybe it was so boring I tuned it out the first thousand times" Sonic sighed. Sonia clenched her fists "I'll see ya later. This hedgehog's gonna scout ahead in style" he started walking to the van doors
"No way bro! We gotta stay together, its a jungle around here. Full o' traps and spies" Manic told him "No problemo! If anything comes up I'll-"
"Just stay in the van!" Manic snapped, feeling his blood pressure rising. Sonic rolled his eyes
"Ok, ok, chill!" he sat back down, tapping his fingers in an irritatingly bored motion. Manic groaned, the temptation to strangle him was too much right now.
Sonia leaned over and whispered to Manic "Manic. He's a brat. I can't take it!"
"I know how you feel" Manic whispered back
"Your oldest! You handle it!" Sonia hissed
"Ok, ok. I'll think of something" he assured. It was true, when they'd been fighting about who was older and not being able to tell because they were triplets, they asked the oracle and he'd revealed their age orders. Sonic was pretty peeved at being the youngest though.
When they arrived in No man's land, Sonia was grateful, she loved Sonic but he was being a complete pain in the neck right now "And what now?" Sonic asked
"Easy, we find our guide...there he is!" she pointed to a wolf wearing a turban who was coming over to them "Ah! There you are, I was worried I'd have to reschedule" he smiled warmly
"Yeah, yeah, enough chit chat. Lets go, my feet are itchin' for some action!" Sonic whined. Manic nudged him with his elbow
"shut it!" he hissed. The guide smiled
"Its ok. Come, I'll show you the cell blocks" he lead them underground somewhere
"Manic. Did you think of something?" Sonia whispered, referring to their earlier conversation
"Yeah...sorta. I'm not gonna tell ya right now though. Don't worry, I'll use it when I have to" he assured. Being calm did have its advantages to his thinking.
"This place is soundproof and extremely hard to get out of. Masses upon masses of escape tunnels we dug inside the cells to keep the prisoners in. It saves room. Or it did...until they said it was a safety hazard and inhumane, so it was abandoned. But it can still be put to good use against Eggman" he explained. Sonia nodded
"hmm...well, if we take it, we can fix that up" she reasoned
"Would you like to see inside the cells. You can take the keys inside if you don't trust me, I'll come too" he said, opening a cell and going inside. Manic shrugged
"Why not?" they went in, it was pretty scary, dark, dank and stinking. Sonic tapped his foot impatiently
"We came, we saw, its boring. Lets go"
"Sonic!" Sonia hissed
"You know, my people built all of this over fifty years ago" the guide continued
"Yeah, well couldn't your people build something useful?" Sonic asked rudely. Manic, who was silently fuming at the time, snapped at his rudeness
"Ok! That's It! Sonia, please take our guide elsewhere. I have to...talk...to Sonic" he seethed. Sonia was shocked at his sudden outburst; Manic was normally so calm and collected. When he lost his cool, it wasn't pretty. She nodded "Ok...come on, I wanna see...the uh...structure designs! Do you have them?"
"Of course!" she and the guide left.
Sonic continued to tap his foot "Oh great, another lecture...Well, might as well get it over with" he sighed. Manic felt his eye twitch "Oh, I'm not gonna lecture ya. But you'll wish I had once I'm done with ya" he advanced. Sonic didn't like this tone that Manic was taking, it made him nervous, especially when he advanced on him
"n-now hold on there bro! D-don't do something you'll regret!" he backed off, only to have Manic grab his wrist, drag him out, sit on a boulder and haul him over his lap. Sonic struggled "Hey! Manic! L-Lemme up! Jokes over!" he cried. Manic positioned him carefully and placed a hand on the small of his back, he was making sure that he couldn't Sonic spin his way out, he wanted this to be just right. Unfortunately, Sonic was putting up more of a fight than first thought. Manic grunted "Quit struggling! Your only making this worse for yourself" he told him sternly
"As if! I didn't do anything!" Sonic defended
"Really? Well, lets review! Your rude to people and your annoying! Your acting like a little brat! And brats need to be punished!" Manic seethed, taking the material of his glove in his teeth and pulling it off, then after he spat it out, he raised his hand in the air and delivered a painful slap to his brother's bottom, causing a hiss from Sonic. Manic could tell he wasn't going to make it easy so he decided to go in a hard rythm. He delivered slap upon slap to his brother's rear. Sonic hissed and supressed whimpers 'Not gonna cry! Not gonna give him the satisfaction!' he thought suddenly. Manic frowned and increased the speed and strength of his slaps, turning Sonic's rear red. Sonic started to tear up, he couldn't stop them seeing as he was using all of his might to not sob. Manic caught him by surprise on the undercurve of his bottom and that caused him to yelp out again and again. Manic wasn't just stopping there though "I'm. Gonna. Make. Sure. You. Learn. Something!" he punctuated each word with a slap to his thighs. Sonic couldn't take it any more, he'd felt pain before but nothing was so intense as this "M-Manic! Stop!" he cried out, choking on a sob "i-it h-h-hurts!"
"Duh!" Manic spat, slapping harder. Sonic started sobbing hard against his own will
"Stop it p-please!"
"Not. Yet!" Manic hissed. He delivered thirty more swats each to his bottom and thighs before finally stopping for breath. Sonic ceased his kicking and broke down into sobs. Manic noticed him and hauled him on to his feet "Ok. Now into that corner!" he pointed to one of the cells. Sonic looked back at him with tear stained eyes
"b-but..."
"GO!" Manic demanded, making Sonic jump but comply. His legs were shaky so he couldn't walk very well. Manic grabbed his arms and pulled him into the corner "Stay there with your hands on your head! If I come back and find their not there, then I'm gonna be REALLY angry!" he snapped. Sonic did as he said. Manic nodded with satisfaction as he took his glove off the ground and slipped it back on "I'm gonna find Sonia to see where she is. I'm gonna lock the gate. You can spin your way out, but we'll never talk to you again if you do" he explained, locking the gate and leaving. He was by no means any softer than he was before. Sonic was left alone with his thoughts 'stupid! Why'd he do that?' he bitterly tried to bite back a sob but with no use 'Its not like he had to! He could have just lectured me! I would have paid attention...eventually' he thought 'probably would have...could have...' he was starting to reflect on his personality now. He shook his head, tears splattering all over the place. He was too aware of the phenomenal burning sensation in his butt, who'd have thought Manic would lose his cool like that? 'is he really that mad?...would they be happier if I wasn't here?...' this caused even more tears to run down his cheeks with more audible sobs.
Manic looked at his watch, he'd found his sister and the guide so right now he was just waiting for Sonic to learn his lesson and for himself to cool down. Sonia found the courage to speak "maybe you should go to him?" she suggested. Manic grunted with a small nod
"I guess. You guys wait here, it'll be kind of embarrassing" he explained
"Sure. What'll we do in the meantime?" she asked. Manic shrugged
"I don't know. You think of something" he said as he walked out. Sonia sighed and looked to the guide "So...tell me one more time how this building was founded..."
Manic took his time going down the corridors, trying to piece together what he was going to say 'for some reason, I don't think sorry is going to cut it. Plus, I shouldn't have to apologize!' he though stubbornly but shook his head 'no...I see how we're related. We're both stupidly stubborn' he knew he was getting close when he heard Sonic crying. He sighed and leaned against the cell bars "You can take your arms down now" he told him. Sonic heaved in his breath and took his arms down, then slowly turned to face him. Manic unlocked the gate to let him out. Sonic came out and felt himself being turned around in front of his brother, he refused to look at him though, especially since he was crying. Manic folded his arms "So. You learn anything?" he asked
"You had no right!" Sonic snapped, it didn't sound the least bit threatening though. Manic rolled his eyes "I think I did. I'm older than you" he told him
"Only by two hours!" Sonic defended, sniffling in his tears
"That doesn't change the fact that you were acting like a brat. Sonic, your bad attitude is gonna get you into a lot of trouble soon! That's why I tried to nip it in the bud, but its obviously not worked very well, so..." he reached out for Sonic again, only to have him step back, terrified
"No! No! It worked! I'll be good! Just, don't do it again!" he begged. Manic raised an eyebrow
"Not sure..."
"I will! Manic I promise!" Sonic assured, tears overflowing "I will! Please, I will, believe me"
"Ok, I'll hold you to it, but if you break it, I'll be mad" he warned
"ok, ok, I understand, I won't let you down!" Sonic was getting more than a little distressed. Manic smiled slightly
"Alright. I believe you. C'mon, lets find Sonia"
"sorry" Sonic whispered "didn't mean to be a brat"
"Its ok" Manic nodded as he slipped his arm around his younger brother and started to lead him in the direction to his younger sister, only to get a hiss from him
"ow..."
"Hurts? Good, I got cold cream in the van. You run back, I'll tell Sonia where we'll be" he instructed. Sonic nodded and walked as best as he could to the van. Chuckling at Sonic's hisses, Manic went to find his sister.
Sonia raised a playful eyebrow at Manic's story "So, think he'll behave now?" she asked
"He should, otherwise..." Manic trailed off "Now if you'll excuse me, I gotta take care of something"
The end
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