Chapter 1 - Well-beast
Submitted May 1, 2004 Updated May 1, 2004 Status Incomplete | A poem I wrote about a poor creature that lives in a well.
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Chapter 1 - Well-beast
Chapter 1 - Well-beast
There once was a beast
that lived in a well
Its unkindly appearance
Made one feel unwell
There was also a boy
his name was Pip
he thought it was stupid
and threw rocks at it
This, of course, proved
to be a mistake
For the beast made him into
a delicious cake
There was also a girl
her name was Vicky
She hated the beast
she thought it was icky
When it peeked out of the well
she stabbed its head
In a few short minutes
she was utterly dead
Children disappeared
from all around
None of them
were ever found
(c) Gozer: Kathia Marley
that lived in a well
Its unkindly appearance
Made one feel unwell
There was also a boy
his name was Pip
he thought it was stupid
and threw rocks at it
This, of course, proved
to be a mistake
For the beast made him into
a delicious cake
There was also a girl
her name was Vicky
She hated the beast
she thought it was icky
When it peeked out of the well
she stabbed its head
In a few short minutes
she was utterly dead
Children disappeared
from all around
None of them
were ever found
(c) Gozer: Kathia Marley
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CN5 on June 28, 2005, 8:37:24 AM
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kai_the_hedgehog on May 11, 2005, 2:46:17 PM
Brillant, Gozer, as always.DarkKrystal on September 1, 2004, 12:52:28 PM
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*Twitch* That was... *Twitch* Weird. BUT COOL! ^_^itsjustme on August 5, 2004, 1:48:34 PM
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brilliant! Utterly Brilliant!unloved_poet on August 3, 2004, 3:32:35 PM
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wow, that was..creepy.*savs t favs*DarkDusk on May 5, 2004, 8:12:10 AM
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I like this poem tells a good story and it is a great story too + faves 789900034526790008453 million timessally_the_ragdoll on May 4, 2004, 11:01:45 AM
reminds me oddly of tim burton.......maybe because, YOU RULE!!!!!sally_the_ragdoll on May 4, 2004, 11:01:17 AM
BRILLIANT GOZER!!!! ::starts chanting and bows to ground::
*ponders own question*
BECAUSE I AM A DUMBA**!!!!!!!!!
*favs*