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Chapter 2 - Death

Ahehehe.... this is kinda my own made story
i maked this hard so plese comment and rate
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Chapter 2 - Death

Chapter 2 - Death
So Shaitah immedietly run to his wife's room.

Shaitah: You need to go now

Elizabeth: What about you and our child?

Shaitah: I don't know what's gonna happen to me. Just go and take care of our child. Tell her who am i and what i did.

Elizabeth: Your gonna die aren't you? Our child without a fathe *cries*

Shaitah: Just go! Protect yourself and our child.

Elizabeth: Didn't you forget it? I'm a fairy. i got magic. I can fight with you.

Shaitah:no you can't fight, your pregnant remember

Meanwhile...

Shin:Look for them now! now!

so thw guards start walking

Shin: Faster! if you didn't found them, i'll kill you.

So the guards start walking

Shaitah: Their comming go now!

   The knights came to Shaitah. They tried to kill him but they didn't instead Shaitah killed them.

Shin: What took those guys too long? I think i shall be the one to kill shaitah and Elizabeth.

   So he look for them. Shaitah heard some steps and then he tell the name of thier child. "Shirah" he said. Shaitah go with his wife at the back door and leave Elizabeth there. Shaitah locked the door just after he heared a footstep very near the room.

Shin: At last i found you

   Shin fought Shaitah and at the last attack Shaitah's sword flew away.

Shin: Any last words?

Shaitah:You killed father! Isn't that enough to you?

Shin: If only father have give me his place i woud not kill him, but he did not.

Shaitah: i would have give it to you, if you asked.

Shin: What do you think of me a fool?

   After that he killed Shaitah. Before Shaitah's blood ran out. Shin lost his temper and began to Konck out every door in the kingdom. 

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nextguardian on October 30, 2007, 2:49:38 PM

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nextguardianThe last paragraph is my fav part *****

Love2talk11 on October 3, 2007, 10:18:52 AM

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Love2talk11Sweet! write more plz!!!!!!!
***** 5 stars 4 you!!!!!!!

gaaralover1 on September 7, 2007, 12:57:38 PM

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gaaralover1This is good.. * * * * *... That's what I give.. 5 stars and two thumbs up! And a big huge congartulating grin. This is such a great story Haku17

KidRaccoon on September 2, 2007, 8:27:46 AM

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KidRaccoon*****5 stars, Audrey-chan!!!!!!!!!! XD