Chapter 2 - Behind the Door
Submitted June 3, 2007 Updated June 3, 2007 Status Incomplete | V1k: I am doing this on my bro's profile B-cause I want him to write A story. First chapter is mine to get him started!
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Chapter 2 - Behind the Door
Chapter 2 - Behind the Door
So I opened the door there I saw a person and he said, "Hi, I am Niv and this is my brother Vin." As I stared at the two people I reached to take my hat off but I hesitated I noticed that I really had no friends, so I said hi to them. They said, "Hi we brought you seventeen pies!" I said, "I do not like pie and why seventeen?"
"We dont know," they said. then Vin blurted out that his brother Niv likes Vik the girl across the street. I know that she is an alien like me but I am not an irken.
Then the two brothers asked me if they could come in. So I said yes but first I tell them but whatever you do do not go in the basment or upstairs I said knowing if they went down stairs in the basement jim my alien pet would kill them and if they went up stairs I would kill them. then I saw a third guy.
He probably didnt hear me.He said his name was tayte and as soon as he came in he went into the basement I ran down and saw jim eating tayte I laughed not not quietly at all everyone could hear me Vin and Niv ran in.
Niv ran upstairs so did Vin they somehow knew that I had to kill them.
I heard Vin scream while I was down stairs I took my hat off and let jim out off the basement. I told him to go upstairs and kill vin I will kill Niv. when we got up stairs niv had smashed a big hole in my window.
He tried to jump out the window but the tentecle from under my hat grabed him I looked at jim he was throwing Vin in the air vin was having fun! I gave jim a sighn Vin had fun till he was silenced. Niv on the other hand got out with a knive he found on the ground
He jumped out the window he was hurt when he hit the ground he ran away. I was not happy I said s#!t and I took jim back to the basement he was still hungry
then I gave him a goat and i went up stairs to examine Vins body. HE DID NOT LOOK HUMAN. Infact he was an irken and his blood was green and it was everywhere well owell
then i went upstairs to my bedroom and I went to bed
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Happynutshell on June 3, 2007, 7:57:42 AM
I am not sure if anyone will read this but if you do tell me