Chapter 2 - Chapter 1: Watch Your Back
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Chapter 2 - Chapter 1: Watch Your Back
Chapter 2 - Chapter 1: Watch Your Back
Allegiances
ThunderCan:
Leader: Twostar-beautiful black -and-white calico she-cat
Deputy: Downypelt-a handsome black-and-white tom
Medicine Cat: Embersnout-a once-handsome, old but experienced ginger tom
Warriors:
Eagleheart- a ginger warrior with black paws, and a strong and sturdy young cat who lives up to his name
Stifftail-a senior warrior who is always willing to prove himself; a dark tabby
Gorsepaw- Stifftail's young black apprentice; a sturdy and thickset tom
Mottledfur- A young blue-gray warrior she-cat
Bloodclaw- A wise young warrior just out of apprenticeship. Short ginger fur goes to legs; paws are deep roan.
Ringpelt- Old black tom with the sense of any elder, yet the power of a young warrior
Glorypaw- A pretty roan she-cat, white paws.
Tenorvoice- A large and sturdy white tom with equally white eyes.
Glasspaw-A small and adventurous she-cat; black and brown
Manglepelt-a gray and blue mottled furred she-cat; her body is permanently cracked to one side
Queens:
Threetoe- a young black queen that is expecting her litter any day now. Lost one toe during ferocious battle.
Crippledjaw-a white, strained she-cat whose back has a cripple, only Crippledjaw also suffers from a permanently dislocated jaw. Elders-
ShadowClan-
Leader: Ragingstar-rusty coloured tom with a sixth claw on each paw
Deputy: Ebonfur-a black and gray tabby tom whose left eye was torn out, a black blotch and three scars tell the tale themselves.
Medicine Cat: Taintedheart-a tortoiseshell she-cat with a large scar across her belly. Long scars go from her temple to shoulders
Warriors-
Soilear-a pale nutmeg coloured she-cat with twin tabby ears
Friskpaw- Soilear's apprentice; a black cat with white ears and white on the tail
Smallear- a ginger, tom with long dangerous claws. Enormous paws on sturdy legs. Tiny eyes, hence the name
Pouncepaw- Smallear's apprentice; a sleek, brown tom with large hind legs
Whitefoot- a black senior warrior tom with completely white paws
Scringeclaw-a large tom with gnarled claws and a twisted leg
Boldstripe- A she-cat on the edge of retirement to the Elders; completely black pelt with one white, splotchy stripe going down her back
Apprentices:
Friskpaw
Pouncepaw
Queens:
Daisypelt-a beautiful she-cat with strong and muscular paws, nursing three kits
Frownface- a white senior she-cat nursing her last two kits
Elders:
Drowzytail-a black tom with a tail that seems broken
Gracelegs-a ginger she-cat with long, elegant legs, white face
WindClan-
Leader: Fallingstar-a brown tom with four white paws, deep emerald eyes
Azurestar- a shiny, blue-gray pelted tomcat, with black ears
Deputy: Flamepelt-a bright orange tabby tom with distinct eyebrow markings
Tiptail- a gaunt, black tom with part of his tail missing
Medicine Cat: Threelegs- a young she-cat just out of apprenticeship, only has three legs
Fuzzpaw- Threelegs' apprentice, a golden she-cat
Warriors:
Lionmane- a large, roan tom with a darker pelt around his head
Azurepelt- a shiny, blue-gray pelted tomcat, with black ears
Rippaw- Flamepelt's apprentice, a large tortoiseshell tom
Tiptail- a gaunt, black tom with part of his tail missing
Catpaw- Tiptail's apprentice, wise and young she-cat tortoiseshell with a dark brown colour on the end of her tail
Crowdance-a large, sleek, shiny black tom whose fur glows like a crow's
Queens:
Gonetail- the eldest and only nursery Queen, with only a stump for a tail, nursing two kits
Elders:
RiverClan-
Leader: Flashstar-a sleek white she-cat
Deputy: Wildpelt-a wise and generous tom cat whose name is the opposite of his calmness
Medicine Cat: Rabbitleaf- a quick-witted, old golden furred cat, forest green eyes
Warriors:
Redspeck- a roan tom, dying of illness
Dandypelt- a golden she-cat, dying of illness
Forestpaw- Dandypelt's apprentice, a young orange tom, caught illness
Queens:
Elders:
Loners/kittypets:
Madclaw: an insane black lone cat
Scruffy- a young black and white kittypet
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Warriors: The Second Prophecy
Written By: Skye
Illustrations By: Skye
All cats written here are made and © Skye Tasker; all ideas of cats are © Erin Hunter.
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Chapter 1: Watch Your Back
The warm summer breeze blew through the thickly wooded area drawing ripples on the cool stream water that passed down the small hill. The sunlight shone through the trees to reveal a large camp. A small, black tom of senior age climbed the small slope stealthily away, looking back once or twice to reassure himself that he was not being followed. Once he was past the rise and through the gorse tunnel, he padded along the loam until he reached Fourtrees. Making sure that no other cats had by chance come along the same path as he, the black tom leaped over the roots and passed Great Rock. As he trudged through the foliage, he made it to the Thunderpath, the unhealthy stench stinging his nostrils and making his eyes water. Sneezing in revulsion, he passed when no cars were heard nor seen. On the other side waited a dark black and gray tabby tom that was missing his left eye. He nodded as the other passed, then ran to catch up with him. They turned to the right, heading through ShadowClan's side of the dark, foggy forest. Leaping on top of the first rocky outcropping, the two conversed quietly as they scrambled rock to rock. Once they made it up the small rocky field, they writhed forward, bellies scraping the ground as they made their way to the WindClan territory. Suddenly, from behind them a big voice snarled, “What's this? A ThunderClan warrior and a ShadowClan warrior together on WindClan territory?” Both cats turned, leaped to their paws and faced a band of three border patrol cats.
“Mind your own business, Flamepelt!”
“Mind my own business? Ha! Anything that happens on WindClan territory is what I have a right to know! Either die here, or leave, Ebonfur!”
Ebonfur's gray and tabby fur bristled beside the ThunderClan warrior's pelt. “Ho, Flamepelt, you chose the wrong path!” The ThunderClan warrior spat, leaping onto Flamepelt's orange back. Yowling in pain, he hissed furiously, rolling over and trying to shake him off. Ebonfur grasped a hold of the second border patrol warrior, whose name was Lionmane, and threw him down the rocky hill. The ThunderClan warrior had slain Flamepelt after a fierce struggle. Both looked at the third cat, who stared in fear at his dead mentor's body. Ebonfur snarled, and he ran away. “Come on, Ringpelt, the longer we wait, the more WindClan will miss Flamepelt and the others. We must work fast.”
Throwing his weight onto his body, Ringpelt let the lightness fly to his legs, lifting off with every step. Meowing quietly to Ebonfur, he spoke, “How will we get to him? He'll be in the camp I'd suspect.”
Shaking his head in disagreement, Ebonfur replied, “No, believe me, he'll be at the water pool. Remember, I was in WindClan, and he was leader since I was a kit. He goes there alone every time.”
As they reached the clearing of field grass, a small pool of fresh water lay before them, as well as a dark brown tom. After a moment's silence, Ringpelt whined quietly, “I..I can't do this, Ebonfur!” Than, leaping out of the undergrowth, he yowled, “Run, Fallingstar!”
Ebonfur hissed and leaped at Ringpelt's throat, which he clamped tightly with his muscular jaws. “You were supposed to help me, Ringpelt. No wonder ShadowClan does not favour ThunderClan-they are too scared to do anything!”
Letting Ringpelt's convulsing body go, he ran after Fallingstar, who had saw everything and taken off. The deputy of ShadowClan yowled triumphantly and grasped Fallingstar's leg.
Spitting furiously, Ebonfur raised one, hooked and sharpened claw…
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