Chapter 5 - Chapter 4: Attack on the Camp
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Chapter 5 - Chapter 4: Attack on the Camp
Chapter 5 - Chapter 4: Attack on the Camp
Allegiances
ThunderCan:
Leader: Twostar-beautiful black -and-white calico she-cat
Deputy: Downypelt-a handsome black-and-white tom
Medicine Cat: Embersnout-a once-handsome, old but experienced ginger tom
Warriors:
Eagleheart- a ginger warrior with black paws, and a strong and sturdy young cat who lives up to his name
Stifftail-a senior warrior who is always willing to prove himself; a dark tabby
Gorsepaw- Stifftail's young black apprentice; a sturdy and thickset tom
Mottledfur- A young blue-gray warrior she-cat
Bloodclaw- A wise young warrior just out of apprenticeship. Short ginger fur goes to legs; paws are deep roan.
Ringpelt- Old black tom with the sense of any elder, yet the power of a young warrior
Glorypaw- A pretty roan she-cat, white paws.
Tenorvoice- A large and sturdy white tom with equally white eyes.
Glasspaw-A small and adventurous she-cat; black and brown
Manglepelt-a gray and blue mottled furred she-cat; her body is permanently cracked to one side
Queens:
Threetoe- a young black queen that is expecting her litter any day now. Lost one toe during ferocious battle.
Crippledjaw-a white, strained she-cat whose back has a cripple, only Crippledjaw also suffers from a permanently dislocated jaw. Elders-
ShadowClan-
Leader: Ragingstar-rusty coloured tom with a sixth claw on each paw
Deputy: Ebonfur-a black and gray tabby tom whose left eye was torn out, a black blotch and three scars tell the tale themselves.
Medicine Cat: Taintedheart-a tortoiseshell she-cat with a large scar across her belly. Long scars go from her temple to shoulders
Warriors-
Soilear-a pale nutmeg coloured she-cat with twin tabby ears
Friskpaw- Soilear's apprentice; a black cat with white ears and white on the tail
Smallear- a ginger, tom with long dangerous claws. Enormous paws on sturdy legs. Tiny eyes, hence the name
Pouncepaw- Smallear's apprentice; a sleek, brown tom with large hind legs
Whitefoot- a black senior warrior tom with completely white paws
Scringeclaw-a large tom with gnarled claws and a twisted leg
Boldstripe- A she-cat on the edge of retirement to the Elders; completely black pelt with one white, splotchy stripe going down her back
Apprentices:
Friskpaw
Pouncepaw
Queens:
Daisypelt-a beautiful she-cat with strong and muscular paws, nursing three kits
Frownface- a white senior she-cat nursing her last two kits
Elders:
Drowzytail-a black tom with a tail that seems broken
Gracelegs-a ginger she-cat with long, elegant legs, white face
WindClan-
Leader: Azurestar- a shiny, blue-gray pelted tomcat, with black ears
Deputy: Tiptail- a gaunt, black tom with part of his tail missing
Medicine Cat: Threelegs- a young she-cat just out of apprenticeship, only has three legs
Fuzzpaw- Threelegs' apprentice, a golden she-cat
Warriors:
Rippaw- Flamepelt's apprentice, a large tortoiseshell tom
Cattail- wise and young she-cat tortoiseshell with a dark brown colour on the end of her tail
Crowdance-a large, sleek, shiny black tom whose fur glows like a crow's
Queens:
Gonetail- the eldest and only nursery Queen, with only a stump for a tail, nursing two kits
Elders:
RiverClan-
Leader: Flashstar-a sleek white she-cat
Deputy: Wildpelt-a wise and generous tom cat whose name is the opposite of his calmness
Medicine Cat: Rabbitleaf- a quick-witted, old golden furred cat, forest green eyes
Warriors:
Redspeck- a roan tom, dying of illness
Dandypelt- a golden she-cat, dying of illness
Forestpaw- Dandypelt's apprentice, a young orange tom, caught illness
Queens:
Elders:
Loners/kittypets:
Madclaw: an insane black lone cat
Scruffy- a young black and white kittypet
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Chapter 4: Attack on the Camp
As Glorypaw and Gorsepaw padded through the gorse entrance to ThunderClan's camp, they stopped, wondering why all of the cats that had gone to the Gathering with them had paused, looking about them with horror. As Glorypaw and Gorsepaw shoved their way through the small crowd, terror and rage flashed among their faces. The ThunderClan camp was nearly eaten alive by an attack. Cats of all sizes were attacking and yowling, hissing, scratching, clawing and spitting in fury. Gorsepaw charged forth to bowl a larger cat over off of Glasspaw, who was yowling in pain. As all of the new arrival's battle meows sounded out, the attacking cats looked in fear as Twostar and Downypelt cleaved one cat's head off in a fumble of red and guts. As the others began to flee, a large, tough looking tom yowled over them, and they stopped, facing the ThunderClan warriors with icy, dangerous stares. The obvious lead cat was larger than his fellow cats, hunger for bloodshed welling up in his eyes. Gorsepaw nipped his leg, and as the leader tried to swipe him off, Gorsepaw flew back in surprise. “You! You're Ebonfur!”
As the ThunderClan cats' eyes widened in disbelief and rage, he took the chance to charge forth and claw Twostar across her soft face, sending her flipping into the air. When she hit the ground, only a rush of air came out of her pained body. As she stood, turning, all cats blinked in terror as they saw her face-her once beautiful, icy blue eyes were both clawed, leaving her blindly wailing for help. Tenorvoice, the most loyal ThunderClan cat ran to her side, licking the gushing blood off her face. “Can't live! NOOOO! My eyes! He cleaved my eyes!”
All of the cats stood rigid, even the attackers, except for Ebonfur, who laughed malevolently, “Your leader was the weakest one of all of you cats! Why do you follow her? Why not me? Did you not see me just destroy your leader's face in a run and blow? Come, and we shall live as the strong rulers of the forest!”
This time Glorypaw walked up, her body and Ebonfur's body the only two not drenched in terror or fear. He stood an easy two cat heads over her, but she looked up, and spat in his face, “I know what happened to Fallingstar. You killed him, didn't you! Why else would you attack us? Because we're closest! Fallingstar, dead, Twostar, blinded. You want to kill every leader to rule!”
As every ThunderClan cat watched, Ebonfur glared frostily at Glorypaw, than smirked, nodding mischeviously. “Yes, young apprentice, I did. And, oh my, would you guess what? You have no leader, and as for Downypelt!”” As he spoke the last part of the ThunderClan deputy's name, he turned with a heavy paw, and swiped at Downypelt's outraged face. But Downypelt ducked and lunged at the semi-exposed underbelly of the surprised Ebonfur. The two deputies were equally matched, swiping and biting at each other. Ebonfur pretended to give in after being clawed, laying down in reverence. As Downypelt turned with satisfaction, Ebonfur lunged at his back. Downypelt fell, air flying out of him as the larger cat landed on him. Raising the same, evil and bloodied claws that took Fallingstar's life, he let them fall towards Downypelt's shaking head—but Glorypaw bowled him over so fast that he only cut Downypelt's ear. Yowling in fury, she landed on Ebonfur's unprotected belly, clawing fiercely with all four paws and biting his hissing snout every time it came in contact with her's. With that, every ThunderClan cat leapt forth to lend killing blows to every one of Ebonfur's followers, who happened to be wandering rogues he had made a deal with. “You evil tom, Ebonfur! Fallingstar is gone, Twostar blinded, the good Deputy of WindClan gone, Ringpelt slain! DIE!” Glorypaw dealt such a sickening blow to Ebonfur's head that he suddenly laid limp. Every cat looked to Glorypaw, awe in their eyes as blood was flowing steadily out of the large tom's body. But, as they watched in fear, he leaped up, kicking Glorypaw off of him, and raced out of the camp through the thorn barrier, all of the living rogue cats with him…
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