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Chapter 6 - The Councecuence

This is a story kind of like that one epesode about Wiked Scary exeped this is real it is not from Raven's head
please read this and commet

Chapter 6 - The Councecuence

Chapter 6 - The Councecuence
Blood Reaper Chapter 6
The Consicuence

" Beast Boy have you made your choice " said the Blood Reaper.
" Yes, I have " BB said. "My choice is.....take me leave my friends alone "
said BB. A tear started to form under BB eyes and there was a river of tears
coming out of starfire's eyes, then BB looked at Raven, she was crying too
BB looked back at the Blood Reaper and said " may i have my last words
with my friends ". The Blood Reaper looked at him and said " fine " in a harsh
voice. BB walked up to Cyborg and Cy said " dude you don't have to do this
let me take your plase". "No that i can't do sorry man" BB said. As he said his
goodbye's to everyone they all had the same suggestion, then he walked up to
Raven she could barly look at him she was so sad, then BB leened close to her
ear and said "Raven before I go I need to say something i never could say before,
Raven I....I...I love you, goodbye " with that she began to cry harder. BB began to
walk torwd the Blood Reaper and the Blood Reaper said " are you ready " BB
looked at him and said " ya I guess I am, goodbye everybody " then he looked at
Raven and said " Raven rember what i said " he lifted a paper out of his pocket and
threw it on the floor. Then a bright light flashed and with all her might Raven lifted
her head up and yelled " BEAST BOY I LOVE YOU TOO " another flash and he
was gone.


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Holy_Palidin on January 15, 2006, 3:17:14 AM

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Holy_PalidinI am sorry but I been having a few problems it will take a while to get the Sequile up sorry :(

Holy_Palidin on November 25, 2005, 5:07:25 AM

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Holy_PalidinDosent anybody notice the piece of paper BB droped on the floor????!!!!

morgoroth on November 20, 2005, 5:09:19 AM

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morgorothThough i usually write critiques i cant help but say that the excellence of your story far outweighs the few errors you made. Keep writing, You can't just leave us all hanging!

PuNkGuRl14 on November 1, 2005, 8:24:23 AM

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PuNkGuRl14U GOT TO WRITE MORE PLEEZE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

123_raven_fan on September 19, 2005, 5:36:16 AM

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123_raven_fanOh my god you like have to write more!

mutantfission on August 26, 2005, 4:27:46 AM

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mutantfissioni liked it. very good thumbs up

kat5888 on August 15, 2005, 2:54:01 AM

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kat5888awwwwww this is so sad... please please pl,ease right another chapter... it is so awsome but it feels so incomplete... so in faves^_^

theGhostofInuYasha on August 12, 2005, 3:06:51 PM

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theGhostofInuYashaRaven and BB are THE perfect couple! DON'T LET IT END LIKE THIS!!!!