Chapter 1 - the red cloak
Submitted June 29, 2005 Updated August 9, 2005 Status Incomplete | a woman goes in search of the sites of fairytales (little red riddeng hood ect.)and meets the big bad wolf
Category:
Miscellaneous » Writing » Action/Adventure |
Chapter 1 - the red cloak
Chapter 1 - the red cloak
Ethan had seen it many times before,being a monster hunter and all,but
it still scared him.It was the wolf-beast that haunted the redcloak
forest,but most knew him as the big bad wolf.Ethan knew it was
pointless to fight so he ran He ran out of the woods,and into a
customer.Her name was Milly Danials,the daughter of famous folklorest
Jackson Danials.She wanted Ethan to take her into redcloak forest,the
original site of the little red ridding hood story.
After Ethan led Milly to the forest's edge he went back to his home to
get the supplies he didn't have time to get before.Milly stepped into a
clearing and noticed something that she had never seen before,and it
frightened her.She saw what seemed to be a wolf standing on it's back
legs,and it's forepaws seemed to have thumbs.It ran toward her,growling
and foaming at the mouth,but just as it was about to attack,it turned
and ran,for seemingly no reason.
As everything seemed to calm down Milly was startled again,but this
time it was by a face she knew.Ethan poped out of the thickets with a
revolver and a backpack filled with water.Another,more shaggy,man
appeared out from behind Ethan."this is Mr. Biggs"said Ethan"He said he
knew where the grandmother's house is."
"I dont advise against going to her house"Mr.Biggs muttered in a gruff
voice."but it's dangerous."But Milly insisted so he showed them the
path,but he didn't go with them.Milly then let out a scream so loud it
could wake the dead, which might have been exactly what it had done.
Biggs ran to aid in any way he could,he ran faster than any man alive.
When he reached them all he could see was hoards of reanimated corpses.
His mighty sword-fighting skills and the others' guns blasted these
unholy creatures back to the grave."You should be more careful,alot of
things in these woods will try to kill you,the woods themselves might
give it a shot."Biggs said calmly."The house is up ahead."
-chapter 1 end
it still scared him.It was the wolf-beast that haunted the redcloak
forest,but most knew him as the big bad wolf.Ethan knew it was
pointless to fight so he ran He ran out of the woods,and into a
customer.Her name was Milly Danials,the daughter of famous folklorest
Jackson Danials.She wanted Ethan to take her into redcloak forest,the
original site of the little red ridding hood story.
After Ethan led Milly to the forest's edge he went back to his home to
get the supplies he didn't have time to get before.Milly stepped into a
clearing and noticed something that she had never seen before,and it
frightened her.She saw what seemed to be a wolf standing on it's back
legs,and it's forepaws seemed to have thumbs.It ran toward her,growling
and foaming at the mouth,but just as it was about to attack,it turned
and ran,for seemingly no reason.
As everything seemed to calm down Milly was startled again,but this
time it was by a face she knew.Ethan poped out of the thickets with a
revolver and a backpack filled with water.Another,more shaggy,man
appeared out from behind Ethan."this is Mr. Biggs"said Ethan"He said he
knew where the grandmother's house is."
"I dont advise against going to her house"Mr.Biggs muttered in a gruff
voice."but it's dangerous."But Milly insisted so he showed them the
path,but he didn't go with them.Milly then let out a scream so loud it
could wake the dead, which might have been exactly what it had done.
Biggs ran to aid in any way he could,he ran faster than any man alive.
When he reached them all he could see was hoards of reanimated corpses.
His mighty sword-fighting skills and the others' guns blasted these
unholy creatures back to the grave."You should be more careful,alot of
things in these woods will try to kill you,the woods themselves might
give it a shot."Biggs said calmly."The house is up ahead."
-chapter 1 end
Comments
You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment
Nami on July 1, 2005, 1:30:19 PM
Nami on
Rinii on July 1, 2005, 12:44:44 PM
Rinii on
“Damn you and your cliffhangers!! -_-'… You’re killing me like this”tis awsome indeed ^^
btw, i tried callin you... but it was no longer you... i was lost for 15 minutes cuz of that awkward set back *shakes head*
*laughs at lameness*
Nami on June 29, 2005, 2:05:07 PM
Nami on
Damn you and your cliffhangers!! -_-'stoopid Inu *shakes head*
Nami on June 29, 2005, 12:36:09 PM
Nami on
YAY! Ya added more, but you need to make it longer than one paragraph *sigh* -_-'Your killing me like this . . .lol
Rinii on June 29, 2005, 11:07:04 AM
Rinii on
*sniffles* soooo proud... ya finally got a computer and put one up... and it's good -^_^-
Nami on June 29, 2005, 7:22:17 AM
Nami on
YAY! Luvin' it!!=^_^=Oh yeah, I have a quiz on quizilla that I think you might like its got a werewolf in it but I only have one chapter up. The next one im going to put in the werewolf's point of veiw tho so i think you'd prolly like that one. My account on quizilla is Nami-san04. YAY again I LUV this story!!
Nami on June 29, 2005, 6:41:25 AM
Nami on
GAAH Inu, cuz, your gonna have to add more! It sounds awesome already. And I wish that your word document thing would work but hey I have an Idea! *little candle* You can type it on the comment boxes and I can copy and paste em all together on wordpad for ya and then put it on the non-comment part majiggy. That is if ya want me too. TTYL!!!
Now get started on numba 2!! *obviously can't wait* I'm Luvin it lol.