Chapter 1 - A Love across time
Submitted October 18, 2004 Updated October 18, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is what you get when you watch the Inuyasha movie Affections Touching across time DVD 12 times ^_^ enjoy more poems coming!
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Chapter 1 - A Love across time
Chapter 1 - A Love across time
Eyes like amber a precious stone,
Snowy white hair,
He is one I want to call my own,
Pinned to a scared tree,
After we met he became the world to me
Even if he seems not to care,
I know love is somewhere there,
Another woman wants him for her,
Weird because she is made from dirt,
What he sees in her I will never know,
But what he thinks of me continues to grow,
He will stay close to my heart,
Until our times pulls us apart..
Snowy white hair,
He is one I want to call my own,
Pinned to a scared tree,
After we met he became the world to me
Even if he seems not to care,
I know love is somewhere there,
Another woman wants him for her,
Weird because she is made from dirt,
What he sees in her I will never know,
But what he thinks of me continues to grow,
He will stay close to my heart,
Until our times pulls us apart..
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winterrose3011 on January 3, 2009, 8:34:50 AM
inuyasha wants to be with kikyo but also wants to be with kagome. kikyo wants to bring him to hell with her. inuyasha knows that kagome saves him even if hes to dangerous to be around. its probaly hard for him to chose.sangofan1 on July 22, 2006, 4:34:18 PM
sangofan1 on
awww thats so sadDarkFlameAngel on May 16, 2006, 10:58:24 AM
also, kikyo will only be with inu if he's human.....and kagome (awesome girl) loves him as a hanyou.....see my point? inu should stay wit kag cuz kik wants him to change, and kag loves him how he is. =^_^= DarkFlameAngel on May 16, 2006, 10:56:02 AM
ok, ya no what? everytime i read somethin like this, i see zelda41 sayin kikyo's awesome.........ITS A GOD FORSAKEN LIE!!!!! inu/kag forever! =^_^= kikyo's made of dirt,(quote), so she should die again and stay dirtEmperor_Seshoraku on April 19, 2006, 9:26:36 AM
WOW! that was so COOL! you should now try to do stories!Inu_lover1644 on January 24, 2006, 12:46:49 PM
AWW!...THATS SO SAD! BUT I LIKE IT! (:))mistymay on December 18, 2005, 1:51:16 AM
mistymay on
Get outta her Kikyo! Awespme Poem!! Kagome+Inu 4EVA! DO NOT DARE LISTEN TO zelda41!dulce on December 2, 2005, 10:11:01 AM
dulce on
dis is a great poem and all of the other people dat said it waz shoot dont listen to dem and keep on writng:)Pockykitten3 on November 3, 2005, 12:37:44 PM
Pockykitten3 on
this is a great poem! Do NOT listen to Zelda 41. this poem is great and lets you really understand kagome's feelings twoards inuyasha and kikyo. never give up!zelda41 on October 15, 2005, 2:33:33 AM
zelda41 on
THIS SUCKS ITS SH*& I HATE IT OHH AND INUYASHAS FEELING 4 KAGOME DONT GROW THEY SHRINK
K AND INUYASHA SEES LOVE,BEUTY,
AND CARINDNESS IN KIKYO
Inuyasha_Girl15 on February 6, 2005, 4:16:38 AM
OMG I feel so good ^_^BlackFireDemon01 on February 5, 2005, 6:20:27 AM
i love this poem sum1whosnvrthere on November 16, 2004, 10:39:22 AM
Sad yet true, love the part with "Wierd because she is made of dirt" I love it, *favs, both artist and pic*~~Just Sum1
mustanggirl on November 5, 2004, 3:21:44 PM
mustanggirl on
that was sorta sad to me your a very good author make another one when inuyasha movie 2 comes out please^^Sesshys_girl_5579 on October 23, 2004, 12:20:03 PM
I think its very good! ^.^Koolkat6968 on October 21, 2004, 11:47:15 PM
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AwesomeSephir0th666777 on October 20, 2004, 10:18:12 AM
yay!good poem!
very coolgood!
The First InuYasha movie rocks!
But the third is the best!
Inuyasha_Girl15 on October 18, 2004, 12:40:17 PM
I think it sucks but others may think otherwise.