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Betrayal (Rated G)

Zim recieves letters of admiration from someone and writes back. Then the story goes to story form and you find out who sent the letters. It gets better...JUST READ! ^_^

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introduction
Submitted: August 13, 2005 • Updated: August 13, 2005
Word count: 1858 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 238

Chapter 2 - Chapter 1
Submitted: August 15, 2005 • Updated: August 15, 2005
Word count: 2600 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 219

Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: August 16, 2005 • Updated: November 25, 2012
Word count: 1188 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 188

Chapter 4 - Chapter 3
Submitted: August 17, 2005 • Updated: August 17, 2005
Word count: 1211 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 200

Chapter 5 - Chapter 4
Submitted: August 17, 2005 • Updated: August 17, 2005
Word count: 1091 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 200

Chapter 6 - Chapter 5
Submitted: August 17, 2005 • Updated: August 17, 2005
Word count: 992 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 207

Chapter 7 - Chapter 6
Submitted: August 18, 2005 • Updated: August 18, 2005
Word count: 2156 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 210

Chapter 8 - Chapter 7
Submitted: August 18, 2005 • Updated: August 18, 2005
Word count: 1814 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 181

Chapter 9 - Chapter 8
Submitted: August 19, 2005 • Updated: August 19, 2005
Word count: 1528 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 178

Chapter 10 - Chapter 9
Submitted: August 21, 2005 • Updated: August 21, 2005
Word count: 1299 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 206

Chapter 11 - Chapter 10
Submitted: August 26, 2005 • Updated: August 26, 2005
Word count: 931 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 198

Chapter 12 - Chapter 11 (I fixed it!)
Submitted: September 25, 2005 • Updated: November 25, 2012
Word count: 790 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 208

Chapter 13 - Chapter 12
Submitted: September 25, 2005 • Updated: September 25, 2005
Word count: 952 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 184

Chapter 14 - Chapter 13
Submitted: December 29, 2005 • Updated: December 29, 2005
Word count: 866 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 187

Chapter 15 - Chapter 14
Submitted: December 29, 2005 • Updated: December 29, 2005
Word count: 656 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 182

Chapter 16 - Chapter 15
Submitted: December 29, 2005 • Updated: December 29, 2005
Word count: 1295 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 171

Chapter 17 - Chapter 16
Submitted: December 29, 2005 • Updated: December 29, 2005
Word count: 1004 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 195

Chapter 18 - Chapter 17
Submitted: December 29, 2005 • Updated: December 29, 2005
Word count: 436 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 183

Chapter 19 - Epilogue
Submitted: December 29, 2005 • Updated: December 29, 2005
Word count: 407 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 191

Comments

Comments (16)

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InvadrKet1 on June 20, 2006, 7:01:08 AM

InvadrKet1 on (Chapter: index)
InvadrKet1I loved that story!!!!! It was so awesome!

cartoon_carazaygurl on January 13, 2006, 4:41:13 PM

cartoon_carazaygurl on (Chapter: 19)
cartoon_carazaygurlthat was both entertaining and a spectacular fan fiction although it was kinda hard to follow at first (as i didn't know all the characters) i still enjoyed reading it. Even though it wasn't all too much detailed I liked how you wrote it. Nice job very nice indeed. I will definitly expect more great things from u. *gives u a cookie and runs away*

Kayari on December 29, 2005, 11:06:15 PM

Kayari on (Chapter: 19)
KayariAw! This story is awesome! Zim was very mean! >

Kayari on December 29, 2005, 10:34:41 AM

Kayari on (Chapter: 2)
KayariThis story is so cute! LOL I would totally drive purple crazy for some cash! whoot!

malonlonlon on August 29, 2005, 8:13:27 AM

malonlonlon on (Chapter: 1)
malonlonlonhmmm this tooks like a really good story!! and it is! ^.^

zamnza on August 18, 2005, 7:15:50 AM

zamnza on (Chapter: 7)
zamnzaLOL Red's gettin' annoyed... I'm getting more soda!

InvdrDana on August 17, 2005, 9:42:47 AM

InvdrDana on (Chapter: 6)
InvdrDanaI am happy because I was able to beat the computer! No more all italics! YAY!!
*gives zamnza more ice cream* All this ice cream is gonna' make me hyper1 YAYAYAYAYA!!

zamnza on August 17, 2005, 8:28:36 AM

zamnza on (Chapter: 5)
zamnzaBut today's WEdnesday! ...oh you mean the story... *gets Soda* This is gonna get good!

zamnza on August 17, 2005, 4:28:32 AM

zamnza on (Chapter: 4)
zamnza*gasp*! Oh no! My ice cream fell over! I'm going to get more! Put more sweetness while I'm gone!

InvdrDana on August 16, 2005, 3:56:17 PM

InvdrDana on (Chapter: 3)
InvdrDanaThanks! Ya' know I believe you're the only one reading it! Besides you, Becca. Jessica (my sister) and I have read this. I need more friends who like Zim! Well chapter 3 will be up tomorrow...or later today.

zamnza on August 16, 2005, 2:29:10 PM

zamnza on (Chapter: 3)
zamnza*grabs a bowl of ice cream* I want to see this!

InvdrDana on August 16, 2005, 11:20:04 AM

InvdrDana on (Chapter: 3)
InvdrDanaFir is Dana's S.I.R unit. His name stands for Funny Irritating Retrieval unit! Happy I am!

InvdrDana on August 15, 2005, 7:01:40 AM

InvdrDana on (Chapter: 2)
InvdrDanaItalics again!? *storms off and yells at computer* YOU STINK!!! *kicks it* OW!!! EVIL COMPUTER!

By the way, I'm all happy you like this story zamnza!

InvdrDana on August 15, 2005, 6:50:54 AM

InvdrDana on (Chapter: 1)
InvdrDanaDana, Meania, and Lexia are my fan characters. As you already know, Dana secretly loves Zim (in this story it's secret). Her best friends are Meania and Lexia. Meania is supposed to be Tallest Purple's daughter, and Lexia is Tallest Red's daughter. Meania and Lexia aren't related, except in other stories. Lexia also has a crush on Zim. In the next chapter, a character named Tyla comes in. She is supposed to be the most powerful Irken there is and gave some of her powers to Tak and Gaz. Gaz is Irken in this one. If you have other questions, just ask!

zamnza on August 14, 2005, 7:08:05 AM

zamnza on (Chapter: 1)
zamnzaAren't these people on Nick.com? If I'm right, WHOO YA! If I'm wrong...please correct me!

This is funny!

InvdrDana on August 13, 2005, 12:32:08 PM

InvdrDana on (Chapter: 1)
InvdrDanaI don't know why the text became in italics. I tried messing with it to see if I could fic it. Better luck next chapter, right? Anyway, I promise you this story gets better! Ask questions about the characters if you need to!