Chapter 1 - The Secret World
Submitted June 18, 2006 Updated October 14, 2006 Status Incomplete | It's just a poem...And yes, I know it has a weird whitestripe effect, but I really don't know why...-_- I tried a thousand other ways, and believe me, it didn't work
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Chapter 1 - The Secret World
Chapter 1 - The Secret World
THE SECRET WORLD
Look
Into the eyes of your dream
See
The life of a stream
Feel
The tears, dripping off your face
Show
Your thoughts as a neverending maze
And search
For yourself
To see
The mirror of me
Look
Into the eyes of your dream
See
The life of a stream
Feel
The tears, dripping off your face
Show
Your thoughts as a neverending maze
And search
For yourself
To see
The mirror of me
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feight on October 14, 2006, 11:29:59 PM
feight on
sirs, which part did she copy?Izzymii on October 14, 2006, 11:32:05 PM
Izzymii on
its underneath, in my comment, smarty. "Look into the EYES of your Dream" and she had: "the eyes of dreams"feight on October 14, 2006, 11:33:18 PM
feight on
sorry XD, we can't all be as smart and talented as you areIzzymii on October 14, 2006, 11:36:24 PM
Izzymii on
haha, clever. Like you aren't XDIzzymii on October 14, 2006, 11:33:05 PM
Izzymii on
btw, its on her old account (not the new one)Izzymii on July 16, 2006, 2:24:41 AM
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here it is ann_schrijfster  "look into the EYES of your DREAM" so your new poem includes...PLAGIARISM!!!!!!likestodraw on June 20, 2006, 6:25:47 AM
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your poems inspire me. they inspire me to write some of my own poems. you have a real gift to be able to draw great and write great.