Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted August 10, 2005 Updated August 10, 2005 Status Incomplete | Ummm...I have NO idea where this came from.
Category:
Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry |
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
One could kill the hunter
Becoming death in turn
Yet if the killer is inside
Then what is left to burn?
To search sacred segments
Concealed within these woods
Inviting demons to discuss
How evils can be good
Darkness balancing purity
A gray mist will surround
Your pity lost to consequence
Where Passion can't be found
An assassin without conscience
Obscured inside this heart
That turned so cold to life's desires
Now has come apart
Will your love consume me?
Leaving light within its wake
And cleanse me of the horrors here
Before it is too late
A savior to antipathy
Is hardly welcome here
And I could never constrain you in
A land that's steeped with fear
Alight out from these wicked woods
Tumbling soft like snow
My diablerie is not for you
Take this heart and go…
Comments
You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment
purplegirl1919 on April 15, 2006, 12:56:38 PM
It is awsome, but it is unTILED, not unTITLED! I am picky like that, so dont mind me.Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:32:46 PM
Trinity_Fire on
wow, another beautiful piece!!! I LOVE your poems! ^_^- The rhyming goes in so well, and I love it when you use words like 'antipathy' and 'diablerie'... and the things you say in this... beautiful. ^___________^-Never stop writing!!! XDDD
Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:26:23 PM
Dr_Postal on
Good rhyming mechanics. A twist on good/evil that I wholeheartedly agree on, because only in the Grey can we find true balance within ourselves.