Chapter 1 - The reminiscence of a love
Submitted July 12, 2006 Updated July 12, 2006 Status Incomplete | I'm suddenly intersted in poetry as well as song writing for whatever reasons now. I want people to tell me if these collections of words are good for a rising eigth grader.
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Chapter 1 - The reminiscence of a love
Chapter 1 - The reminiscence of a love
[color=]In a void of studded nothing,
you hear a stranger call.
Your mangled mind keeps thumping
until your heart and brain stalled.
A footstep in the distance,
a weeping baby''s sigh
This night; the reminiscence
of a night a soul would die.
The remotion of the light.
You stand in the dusted hall,
the rememberance of this night
makes you shiver as you crawl.
The sparks of love and life,
warm as the cloudless sky,
it stopped and cut you like a knife;
it left your soul to die.
His footsteps, close at hand,
adjoining with his feet.
You try to strongly stand,
helpless when your eyes would meet.
The eyes you were staring at now,
that had once been warm and nice,
presently seemed to growl
as they glared; cold as ice.
He took one step more foreward,
then headed out the door.
He took not one glance backward
then he was seen, no, nevermore.[/color]
you hear a stranger call.
Your mangled mind keeps thumping
until your heart and brain stalled.
A footstep in the distance,
a weeping baby''s sigh
This night; the reminiscence
of a night a soul would die.
The remotion of the light.
You stand in the dusted hall,
the rememberance of this night
makes you shiver as you crawl.
The sparks of love and life,
warm as the cloudless sky,
it stopped and cut you like a knife;
it left your soul to die.
His footsteps, close at hand,
adjoining with his feet.
You try to strongly stand,
helpless when your eyes would meet.
The eyes you were staring at now,
that had once been warm and nice,
presently seemed to growl
as they glared; cold as ice.
He took one step more foreward,
then headed out the door.
He took not one glance backward
then he was seen, no, nevermore.[/color]
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