A Twilight Heart
Submitted June 5, 2005 Updated August 26, 2005 Status Incomplete | Sora's life could not be happier.He has his two best friends, but he starts having dreams! Scary ones at that!!! What is the meaning of these dreams? To tell of the future? To be a warning of what is to come? And why is Riku always the one centered a
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Chapter 1 - A Dream and Secret Revealed
Submitted: June 5, 2005 • Updated: June 5, 2005
Word count: 1527 • Size: 8k • Comments: 13 • views: 501
Chapter 2 - Confusion
Submitted: June 16, 2005 • Updated: June 16, 2005
Word count: 1461 • Size: 7k • Comments: 9 • views: 295
Chapter 4 - Sickness
Submitted: July 5, 2005 • Updated: July 5, 2005
Word count: 1793 • Size: 9k • Comments: 9 • views: 290
Chapter 5 - Riku's Breakdown
Submitted: July 11, 2005 • Updated: July 11, 2005
Word count: 1052 • Size: 5k • Comments: 8 • views: 237
Chapter 6 - A bad day
Submitted: August 26, 2005 • Updated: August 26, 2005
Word count: 1089 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 300
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xxRoguexx on November 22, 2007, 1:52:30 AM
xxRoguexx on (Chapter: 6)
pleas do some more.....LadySymphonia on June 26, 2006, 1:31:11 PM
LadySymphonia on (Chapter: 6)
....IN YOUR FACE IN YOUR FRIGGIN FACE RIKU!
YOUR DUMB PIZZA ROLLS GOT BURNT!
HA! YOU CAN'T COOK! Unlike moi....
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!
I love it when stuff bad happens to him.
*sorry to Riku fans please do not kill me*
^-^
I laffed!
LadySymphonia on June 26, 2006, 1:28:10 PM
LadySymphonia on (Chapter: 5)
N-n-noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Sora, noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!
Me: *bust thrus door* Sora!!!!!
Sora: ...
Riku: WTF?
Me: *pushes Riku and holds Sora*
Don't leave me!!!!
yaoi_rules123 on April 5, 2006, 4:54:39 PM
yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 6)
poor riku he needs to pay his bills anyway good chap like alwaysyaoi_rules123 on April 5, 2006, 4:47:41 PM
yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 5)
w-w-what sora's in a coma NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gose to a courner & crys*Keith: Know it is my turn lovely chap & if you make Sora die Seth will cry & then that makes me cry which then makes Seth horny then that makes me horny so there
Seth: shut-up O///O
yaoi_rules123 on April 5, 2006, 4:39:50 PM
yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 4)
nooo sora's sickSeth: when did you stop crying?
Me: good question anyway good chap
yaoi_rules123 on April 5, 2006, 4:29:19 PM
yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 2)
Me: *starts crying my eyes out*Seth: poor Shaun anyway lovely chap
Keith: Seth make love to me!!!!
Seth: not now Keith, anyway again grate chap
Keith: kiss me Seth
Seth: quiet
yaoi_rules123 on April 5, 2006, 6:28:42 AM
yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 1)
sooooo cute poor riku he does not know that sora loves him toolovely chap *faves*
bluemoon_alchemist on March 14, 2006, 2:16:13 PM
bluemoon_alchemist on (Chapter: 6)
DX prick?!?!?!?! *kills homophobe nurse* :D finish this story or your fate will be the same *dundunduuun!*lycan-keyblade-master on February 12, 2006, 6:49:10 AM
lycan-keyblade-master on (Chapter: 4)
is axel from KH2 or something? cuz i havent played that one yet...lycan-keyblade-master on February 12, 2006, 6:32:11 AM
lycan-keyblade-master on (Chapter: 1)
wow thats a gut story,* favs*sili on January 28, 2006, 9:36:21 AM
sili on (Chapter: 5)
I have a question...How come, in all your KH stories so far, Kairi always leaves Sora for Tidus...I mean Tidus has Yuna. Why can't you just make up a character who seem hotter than Sora to her, even though my favorite KH couple is Sora & Kairi.It'll just be fair to everybody. So yea.
...
I like this story so far even if it's a RxS one. Keep writing and comment to me when you have Chapter 4 on "My Sora", okay? I keep checking with no evail.
THX,
Sili~*
DemonTheifQueen on September 19, 2005, 5:42:53 AM
DemonTheifQueen on (Chapter: 6)
YOU NEED TA FINISH THIIIISSSS!!!XD PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEEE?!!!
THIS STORY IS SO EXCITING! SUCH EMOTION!!!
I need ta read the rest of your works!! ^-^
+faves
KH_Fan525 on September 6, 2005, 11:41:12 PM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 6)
I'm so sorry I've lost my inspiration at the moment and am continueing with my other story "My Sora" until my inspiration comes back but I will finish and also make it worth while to readKingdomheartsFanatic2 on August 6, 2005, 11:14:33 AM
KingdomheartsFanatic2 on (Chapter: 2)
this story makes me wanna draw so many pictures >.DemonTheifQueen on August 1, 2005, 5:57:31 AM
DemonTheifQueen on (Chapter: 5)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!*squeals and crys*
I hope Sora survives!
*cocks head* Why isn't Cloud in this story? WHERE IS CLOUD?!?!
*whines*
oh well.....
+faves
DemonTheifQueen on August 1, 2005, 5:47:43 AM
DemonTheifQueen on (Chapter: 4)
*pets Sora* Poor thing....*scoots closer to Riku* You know...If Sora Doesn't make it...I could always...
Riku:HE'S GONNA MAKE IT!
Me: *backs off*
WHERE'S CLOUD STRIFE?!?! *huggles Cloud*
DemonTheifQueen on August 1, 2005, 5:31:56 AM
DemonTheifQueen on (Chapter: 2)
awwwwwwwwwwwwww!^_^ *squeals*
DemonTheifQueen on August 1, 2005, 5:22:07 AM
DemonTheifQueen on (Chapter: 1)
Oh my gosh! THAT WAS EXCITING! I MUST KEEP READING! *squeals*I love yaoi! Love it love it love it!
GothicWiccan on July 25, 2005, 8:45:48 PM
GothicWiccan on (Chapter: 5)
wow! this story is sooo good! i'm new when it comes to kingdom hearts but this has made me really want to watch it! even if it's different from this brilliant piece of writing!!! very well done!!! ^_^ *faves* =DKiki_san on July 23, 2005, 5:31:18 AM
Kiki_san on (Chapter: 1)
What an awsome story!Im on to the next chapter!Incendia on July 11, 2005, 1:43:39 PM
Incendia on (Chapter: 5)
I like everythingto have a touch of drama in it, anyway i really like the story a lot better than mine (i need a bigger vocabulary hehehe)psycho_soccer_monkey on July 11, 2005, 11:48:36 AM
psycho_soccer_monkey on (Chapter: 5)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Sora can't die! Poor Riku. *tear* Write more please!psycho_soccer_monkey on July 11, 2005, 11:46:55 AM
psycho_soccer_monkey on (Chapter: 4)
This is so awesome! Keep going!KH_Fan525 on July 10, 2005, 10:02:52 PM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 5)
Sorry it took so long I had to rewrite it. R&R!!!Riku-kitty on July 9, 2005, 10:16:39 AM
Riku-kitty on (Chapter: 4)
WAHH! I want more....*eyes watered* please?Riku-kitty on July 9, 2005, 10:09:14 AM
Riku-kitty on (Chapter: 2)
KAAAAYYYYAAAA! Lovely story *eyes shine* HA! *reads more*KH_Fan525 on July 8, 2005, 12:53:33 AM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 4)
When I first wrote this I didn't think anyone would read this!!! I might listen yo you guys and put in a lemon... maybe! Thank you all for reviewing!!! I have to restart Ch.4 of this story because it was deleted. Darn computer!!! Oh yeah and sry for spelling and grammar mistakes.(I stink at lang.) R&Rheartless-sinner on July 5, 2005, 2:47:26 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 4)
that is the awesomest(dont think that is a word) chapter so far! you are magnificent!!!heartless-sinner on July 5, 2005, 2:28:15 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 1)
chi!!!!!! yay i love yaoi!!! you are doing a perfect job on this fic and i am totally looking forward to the next chapter!kagesama on July 5, 2005, 5:54:54 AM
kagesama on (Chapter: 4)
o_O sora Better live! T_T You did this so well and I'm glad you got it to show up! I had the same problem with my second chapter but its fine now. i even got the third one to show ok. I just now posted comments on your other chapters cause i forgot to the other day when I read them....lol. And I look forward to the other chapters! ^_^kagesama on July 5, 2005, 5:43:22 AM
kagesama on (Chapter: 2)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAW! KAWAII FLUFF! and no matter how much he deny's (i know i spelled it wrong) it Sora loves Riku! ^_~ Cute chapter! Very well done!kagesama on July 5, 2005, 5:37:57 AM
kagesama on (Chapter: 1)
Yay! Yea I agree, a lemon would be nice. ^_^Hmmm, I wonder who the old enemy could be... Anyways, Great story!Keep writing! Continue continue!
weewoo on July 5, 2005, 3:39:31 AM
weewoo on (Chapter: 1)
hmm being watched by an old anemy, ay? DU DU DUUUNNNN!!!! anyways nice storyPliva on July 5, 2005, 3:24:33 AM
Pliva on (Chapter: 3)
Make sure that the file is in the proper format. TXT, or any of the other ones mentioned. KH_Fan525 on July 5, 2005, 2:33:54 AM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 4)
Yes, finally!!! Sorry it took so long!!! This is going to be a very long story so you know, k!!!! Read and review!!! Enjoy!!!KH_Fan525 on June 27, 2005, 11:57:50 PM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 3)
Why in the world will it not come up!!! I've tried posting it 4 times now. If you know what I'm doing wrong please tell me!!!I have ch.3 done and most of ch.4 it will be up if I can ever post it. I'm so sorry!!!
meeeeeeeee on June 21, 2005, 5:34:50 AM
meeeeeeeee on (Chapter: 2)
DARN IT ALL IM ALMOST CRYING. I DONT CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!meeeeeeeee on June 21, 2005, 5:27:52 AM
meeeeeeeee on (Chapter: 1)
i think this story is so sad. im almost crying and i dont cry!!!crappyusernamehere on June 20, 2005, 5:18:37 PM
crappyusernamehere on (Chapter: 2)
really not much on yaoi but i like the story!jura on June 20, 2005, 8:33:04 AM
jura on (Chapter: 2)
so Beautiful(Teardrop)KH_Fan525 on June 16, 2005, 4:32:59 AM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 2)
Hope you enjoy!!! I won't be able to post for about two weeks because I'm going to a camp, but I will finish this story for you guys. Thanks for those of you reviewing!!!
crappyusernamehere on June 11, 2005, 2:45:43 AM
crappyusernamehere on (Chapter: 1)
aww man, *puts on dunce hat that says "impatient"*KH_Fan525 on June 10, 2005, 10:41:45 PM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 1)
I will have it up as soon as I can, but don't know when that is because I have to go to a camp in about a week! Anyway thank you for reviewing!crappyusernamehere on June 9, 2005, 6:10:51 AM
crappyusernamehere on (Chapter: 1)
i like so far keep going PLZRiku-kitty on June 7, 2005, 2:09:10 PM
Riku-kitty on (Chapter: 1)
I Like it..>I want a lemon......Dam....Okay keep going I love it ^^ KH_Fan525 on June 6, 2005, 11:18:52 PM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 1)
If anyone ever reads my story even if its only one person I'll continue writing for that person so if you read please comment so I can know whether to continue or not!!