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My Sora

This is a story I thought of while I was at camp. I think this one of my best stories. Anyway, this story is of how Sora comes to start living with me until he can fix the Gummi ship. Will he he be able to leave in the end though?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Arrival
Submitted: July 5, 2005 • Updated: July 5, 2005
Word count: 4006 • Size: 19k • Comments: 8 • views: 381

Chapter 2 - Day 2
Submitted: September 20, 2005 • Updated: September 20, 2005
Word count: 1988 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 335

Chapter 3 - Forever Stained
Submitted: November 4, 2005 • Updated: November 4, 2005
Word count: 3785 • Size: 19k • Comments: 5 • views: 345

Chapter 4 - Journal snooping
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: February 13, 2006
Word count: 3185 • Size: 15k • Comments: 4 • views: 329

Comments

Comments (25)

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desertbreeze on February 5, 2007, 1:05:38 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: index)
desertbreezeexecellent one of the best kh stories i've ever read! keep it up.

Daisukeloves on December 2, 2006, 8:37:52 AM

Daisukeloves on (Chapter: 4)
Daisukelovesyou better go one i hate cliff hangers!!!!

lighttails1067 on October 31, 2006, 9:13:47 PM

lighttails1067 on (Chapter: 4)
lighttails1067cute

VioletAngel on August 2, 2006, 12:23:28 PM

VioletAngel on (Chapter: 1)
VioletAngelinteresting... unlike most stories, i can't predict anything! =D Nice job! although i have minimum knowledge of kindom heart... XD

lighttails1067 on July 7, 2006, 8:15:48 AM

lighttails1067 on (Chapter: index)
lighttails1067please write more
if the fifth one is done,please tell me ok?

katara719 on June 7, 2006, 10:33:57 AM

katara719 on (Chapter: index)
katara719right more!!!!!
please!

hiddindarkness on May 25, 2006, 3:04:06 AM

hiddindarkness on (Chapter: index)
hiddindarknessyour really taking your time in writing the rest

lycan-keyblade-master on February 13, 2006, 6:36:39 AM

lycan-keyblade-master on (Chapter: 4)
lycan-keyblade-masterman you have to finish this its really good, maybe better then my story!plz continue.....

KH_Fan525 on February 13, 2006, 5:53:57 AM

KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 4)
KH_Fan525I want you all to know that this fanfiction is now on standby... I'm really sorry but I have no inspiration or incentive to write it... to me it's kinda of like hearing nails on a chalkboard for me to write this, but don't fear because my friends WON'T LET ME QUIT THIS so you have no need to worry. Chapter 5 is halfway written and I will write it when I get get around to it but please don't be mad and leave me no comments!! I really need them!

KHFan525

lycan-keyblade-master on February 12, 2006, 10:42:44 AM

lycan-keyblade-master on (Chapter: 3)
lycan-keyblade-masterwrite more or i will hunt you down... ok not really. but still!!!!

sili on December 28, 2005, 1:28:24 AM

sili on (Chapter: 3)
siliOMG!!!!!!
Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Keep Writing!
Please! ^_^

sili on December 28, 2005, 1:09:45 AM

sili on (Chapter: 2)
siliHey! Don't worry! I have nothing to better to do with my time. Seriously!
I just love your story. So if you think your story is too long, than it too short for others! ^_^
%100 so far~*
Keep Writing!!!!!

sili on December 28, 2005, 12:57:35 AM

sili on (Chapter: 1)
siliIt's THE GREATEST story I've read so far!!!!!!! 100%
On a scale of 1 to 10, you are an 11!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautifully written!!!
I love It!!!!
^_^

GrimDeath on December 13, 2005, 10:36:26 AM

GrimDeath on (Chapter: 3)
GrimDeathGREAT STORY!!!!!
Cant wait till the next chap!
Keep up the good writing!

caza on December 4, 2005, 3:23:28 AM

caza on (Chapter: 3)
cazaWrite More... I will look 4ward to what will happen

caza on December 4, 2005, 2:49:00 AM

caza on (Chapter: 1)
cazaCool Story!!! It would actually fun to see Sora with your own eyes..... I also would want to play with his keychains^^

hipeople on November 4, 2005, 9:44:18 PM

hipeople on (Chapter: 3)
hipeopleLOl!Another great chapter!The sad thing is,though,that I had already read it on fanfiction :^( .....Oh well!And,yea,I kinda found out what yaoi was the same way Sora did..... :^0 I'll keep updating on my story too!

Iwugem_Itchii on November 4, 2005, 10:06:00 AM

Iwugem_Itchii on (Chapter: 2)
Iwugem_Itchii*jumps up and down hyperly* more! more more more more MORE! (not very literate, but this is pretty much my train of thought. looking forward to the next chapter!)

hipeople on September 21, 2005, 11:02:38 AM

hipeople on (Chapter: 2)
hipeopleYAY!ANOTHER CHAPTER!I"M SO HAPPY!*breakdances*Wow,that was new.....anyway...great chapter!Keep up the good work!

KH_Fan525 on September 20, 2005, 7:39:20 AM

KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 2)
KH_Fan525My loyal fans that put up with my lateness I hope you like this chapter and I wish to say that chapter 3 is half way done and to review so that I know I still have someone who wishes to still read this k?

Iwugem_Itchii on July 23, 2005, 8:51:17 AM

Iwugem_Itchii on (Chapter: 1)
Iwugem_ItchiiMORE MORE MORE, it's awesome! I can really relate to your character, only I'm Riku luver ^_^

KH_Fan525 on July 8, 2005, 1:07:44 AM

KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 1)
KH_Fan525I didn't mean to post that part after the chapter two thing but now I'm glad I did it's kinda like a cliff-hanger!

kagesama on July 6, 2005, 12:33:16 AM

kagesama on (Chapter: 1)
kagesamaIt is a very good story, hurry and continue! I want to know what happens! ^_^ But I do have one suggestion if I may, When you use simple sentences, try to fuse them with commas or use 'and'. So instead of for example you say, "I went to look for firewood. It was on the ground." You could say instead, "I went out to look for firewood and found it laying on the ground." Does that help?
But you did a fine job anyways! I would DIE if Sora was real. Lol HEART ATTACK!

clamara on July 5, 2005, 10:37:56 PM

clamara on (Chapter: 1)
clamaraYou should totally write more^^

hipeople on July 5, 2005, 12:20:54 PM

hipeople on (Chapter: 1)
hipeopleI LOVE IT!!!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!Sora is such a goofballl......