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Chapter 1 - First or Only

Short poem that I am sending into a contest at a Linkin Park forum.

Chapter 1 - First or Only

Chapter 1 - First or Only


My Reality



Please don't wake me

I want to stay here in my world

A creation, a monstrosity

In which I cannot be freed

Away from you

Away from myself

Away from reality



Don't disturb me

Forever I shall sleep

Alone, yet carefree

Eloped with the cousin of death Himself

Shouting liberty

As I lay not to be awaken

From my crime of being trapped within a dream



So please don't wake me

I want to stay here

In my creation, my world, my escape

My only reality.

Kei T.

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The_Vampire_Queen on August 11, 2005, 4:00:25 AM

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The_Vampire_QueenI can't believe no one has commented on this! XP ppl just have no respect for original stuff anymore. They prefer all the fanficcys and such. I like fanfics too, but ppl shouldn't ignore original work altogether, huh?

Anyways, this is very wonderfully written. I love the deep meaning behind it and the way you wrote it. Makes me feel like I'm the person speaking to the reader.

*faves* Nice job! =^_^=

Kei_Toshiake on August 7, 2005, 10:23:51 AM

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Kei_ToshiakeI sent this in to another contest also...I could win $1000. Wish me luck!