My Heart
Submitted April 22, 2006 Updated April 26, 2006 Status Incomplete | A young teenage girl is kidnapped because of her heratige and forced to become a Steil, an elemental being bound for war. Will she get away or adapt to the unatural life the Steils?
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Prolouge
Submitted: April 22, 2006 • Updated: April 22, 2006
Word count: 857 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 423
Chapter 2 - Chapter 1
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: April 23, 2006
Word count: 2853 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 450
Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: April 26, 2006 • Updated: April 26, 2006
Word count: 3368 • Size: 18k • Comments: 3 • views: 418
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def456 on November 6, 2006, 4:32:42 AM
def456 on (Chapter: 2)
cool i guess there are two plots going on at the same time.i like those!def456 on November 5, 2006, 7:56:29 AM
def456 on (Chapter: 1)
this is good! i usually don,t like reading but to this story i will make an exception!DarkHieiGurl on May 1, 2006, 2:08:22 PM
DarkHieiGurl on (Chapter: 2)
Aah, Jessica. I wouldn't call this character Sierra. She probably changed the name and the character herself. *cough- sierra doesn't have blue eyes remember?-cough* Yeeah.So I take it you swaped your protagonist to Toren, right?
Ha, you already know I loved this chapter. So I don't have to tell you a thing. ^.~
Though, there were several typographical errors. Next time, before you submit a new chapter, you should rescan your story as to not make little mistakes. Such as misusing a word and spelling errors.
Ketts_Shadow on May 1, 2006, 6:21:26 AM
Ketts_Shadow on (Chapter: 3)
Sierra!! Details are ruling the world in your book! I love it! hehe! Therin hit you! hehe! Post more!FreakyMangaGirl on April 26, 2006, 12:30:28 PM
FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 3)
oh yeah, BOO YA peoples, I've got first comment!
*does first comment dance*
YESH!
FreakyMangaGirl on April 26, 2006, 12:29:54 PM
FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 3)
*squeal*Oh. My. GOD!!!!!!!!!
*jumps up and down*
Your story is SOOOO GOOD!
*bites nails*
I MUST know more. I she from the water clan? She is isn't she?!
*jumps up and down*
OMG!!!!!!!!!
please, PLEEEEASE write more!
*adds to favs*
I LURVE this story!
*hug*
Ketts_Shadow on April 25, 2006, 6:45:15 AM
Ketts_Shadow on (Chapter: 2)
You freakin change ur name! How is it Sierra at one moment, then Toran he next? Yet...Toran is a cool name. Awe-si-um! ^_^Ketts_Shadow on April 25, 2006, 6:37:39 AM
Ketts_Shadow on (Chapter: 1)
Oh me God! Sierra you freakin witch I love as a friend...the prolouge if freakin awesome! *remind myself 2 screech in joy when I see you in 1st period.* ^_^FreakyMangaGirl on April 23, 2006, 9:59:17 AM
FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 2)
OH YEAH!FAVES FAVES FAVES FAVES FAVES!!!!!!
FreakyMangaGirl on April 23, 2006, 9:48:50 AM
FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 2)
omg omg omg!!!!!!!!!! Who's that strange guy? What's he want with Toren? These are things I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FreakyMangaGirl on April 22, 2006, 9:51:16 AM
FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 1)
Hey!OMG!!!!!!!!
This is SO GOOOOOOOOOOD!
Not only are you a talented artist, but a talented writer as well!!!
*jumps up and down*
Write more please- I'm dieing to find out what happens next!
>_<
*adds to favs*
DarkHieiGurl on April 22, 2006, 8:24:37 AM
DarkHieiGurl on (Chapter: 1)
Yaay, awesome!*cough-typos-cough* You shouldn't critisize others about their spelling errors if ya have some problems yourself. ;p
I... don't remember that orange notebook, but whatever. Heh, but I did like this chapter a lot. Next chapter pleease. ^.^