Chapter 1 - None could see
Submitted August 3, 2007 Updated July 5, 2008 Status Incomplete | This is a Bleach fanfic that i will try and my Soul Reaper OC is named Jamal... this might have one of those warning things, spelling might be wrong Enjoy^^
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Chapter 1 - None could see
Chapter 1 - None could see
i will just start this story a little but since no one has joined there wont be much people or anything
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There was a teenager walking down a street alone and suddenly 2 kids appeared at a corner
"JJ!" The little girl shouted
"Hey how have you been? I brought you these flowers" Jamal said as he placed a bouquet of flowers near the corner
"Why didnt you come yesterday?" The boy said
"I'm sorry, its just that i had a lot of homework that i to do so i rushed home and took the short cut" Jamal said as an excuse...but the two children knew him well enough to know what really happened
"So you went to visit them again?" The boy said as the girl was sniffing the flowers...and Jamal was silent
"Yeah..." Jamal said gloomfully "Well i will be on my way now, ok?" Jamal told them as they both nodded
"Thanks for the flowers!...Are you coming again tomorrow?" The little girl shouted as Jamal left
"Yeah i think!" Jamal shouted back and started walking home
******************************************Jamals house*************************************************
"JAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!" His dad screamed as he tried to uppercut Jamal and Jamal caught his hand and kicked his dad at the wall "Well done son...fast reflexes are always good" Jamals dad said as he lay upside down on the wall
"JJ you promised to with me...remember?" Jamals little sister said
"Yes Mai i know...but unfortunately i cant...sorry, im just too tired today, maybe tomorrow" Jamal said lazily as he went into his room
"You always say that, thats excactly what you said yesterdy" Mai whined and then just shut his door
**************************************45 minutes later**************************************************
i comes and goes...that same feeling, that bad feeling, its there and then after a little while it goes, i wish...scratch that...i hope that other people will eventually notice...eventually notice all of the other people in the world, like the ones with chains...or the ones that are faded, i mean i know that that they are spirits but why can no one else see them, or better yet, why can i see them? Jamal thought as he shot up and stared at the window
"Whats that?" He said as he saw a huge monster rampaging around "This isnt good" and then suddenly Jamal noticed that where the monster was walking everyone else was just walking around like there was nothing there! No one stopped, none could see it
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ok now i need people to join...pppppppplllllleeeeeaaaassssseeeee you could either send your info to my profile or right here...
I hope you enjoyed the chapter
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There was a teenager walking down a street alone and suddenly 2 kids appeared at a corner
"JJ!" The little girl shouted
"Hey how have you been? I brought you these flowers" Jamal said as he placed a bouquet of flowers near the corner
"Why didnt you come yesterday?" The boy said
"I'm sorry, its just that i had a lot of homework that i to do so i rushed home and took the short cut" Jamal said as an excuse...but the two children knew him well enough to know what really happened
"So you went to visit them again?" The boy said as the girl was sniffing the flowers...and Jamal was silent
"Yeah..." Jamal said gloomfully "Well i will be on my way now, ok?" Jamal told them as they both nodded
"Thanks for the flowers!...Are you coming again tomorrow?" The little girl shouted as Jamal left
"Yeah i think!" Jamal shouted back and started walking home
******************************************Jamals house*************************************************
"JAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!" His dad screamed as he tried to uppercut Jamal and Jamal caught his hand and kicked his dad at the wall "Well done son...fast reflexes are always good" Jamals dad said as he lay upside down on the wall
"JJ you promised to with me...remember?" Jamals little sister said
"Yes Mai i know...but unfortunately i cant...sorry, im just too tired today, maybe tomorrow" Jamal said lazily as he went into his room
"You always say that, thats excactly what you said yesterdy" Mai whined and then just shut his door
**************************************45 minutes later**************************************************
i comes and goes...that same feeling, that bad feeling, its there and then after a little while it goes, i wish...scratch that...i hope that other people will eventually notice...eventually notice all of the other people in the world, like the ones with chains...or the ones that are faded, i mean i know that that they are spirits but why can no one else see them, or better yet, why can i see them? Jamal thought as he shot up and stared at the window
"Whats that?" He said as he saw a huge monster rampaging around "This isnt good" and then suddenly Jamal noticed that where the monster was walking everyone else was just walking around like there was nothing there! No one stopped, none could see it
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ok now i need people to join...pppppppplllllleeeeeaaaassssseeeee you could either send your info to my profile or right here...
I hope you enjoyed the chapter
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InuNaruFable2 on August 10, 2007, 3:13:55 AM
Whoops! I read this but I forgot to comment. Duh, lol. Anyways, it is great so far!! ^-^Littletwo35 on August 9, 2007, 4:41:41 AM
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its soo good love it