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Chapter 2 - The Monster

This is a Bleach fanfic that i will try and my Soul Reaper OC is named Jamal... this might have one of those warning things, spelling might be wrong

Enjoy^^

Chapter 2 - The Monster

Chapter 2 - The Monster
"Wait a sec...Mai...she went to get grocieries!...that means that shes out there!!!" Jamal realized and then ran out the door and ran towards the monster

"NOOO!!!!" A Girl around Jamals age was screaming "My brother!...Give him back!" She screamed as she angrily stared at the monster and Jamal stood behind the girl stunned


she can see it he thought and then saw his sister in the other hand "MAI!!!!!!!" He yelled

"JJ!!!!!!!!!!!!" Mai screamed and then started to smile a little and cry "You never got to play with me" she cried as she took off her necklace and threw it to Jamal "Remember me" She cried as she and the 18 year old boy eaten by the monster but at the last second the boy screamed "Christa!!!!!!!"

"No..." Jamal whispered

"No..." The other girl said

"NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!" They screamed in unison as a Blue circle of energy circled around Jamal and Pink for Christa


To be continued

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InuNaruFable2 on August 13, 2007, 12:41:40 AM

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InuNaruFable2Great chapter! Yay I am in this one. My poor big brother and Mai. I can't wait until you update!!