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Chapter 1 - A poem

a poem *blushes* um, just a poem

Chapter 1 - A poem

Chapter 1 - A poem
I sit in an empty room, wondering why I'm a gloomThe only thing that keeps me aliveis my soul and your love that I thriveWhat is it about me that you love?am I the one you see above?I've been betrayed many timesbut you seem to know the rhymesI sing to sooth my heartbecause my pain is off the chart,My tears become black stonesand sometimes, all I do is break my bonesI loose control when the red moon is outand I howl and shoutAm I a Goddess of Darkness?in wolf form, I growl and barkI am, who I am, and I am a wolf demon and the Goddess of DarknessMy name, is Kuroi-Kaze, the Dark wind          

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Himehoshii on October 22, 2005, 11:19:21 AM

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HimehoshiiThe imagery in your poem is so vivid. I can literally picture what you are saying.

keautye on July 14, 2005, 1:13:58 PM

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keautyeWow. You have been blessed to write those. This really is beautiful and nicelly wrote. Keep on writing. ^^

Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 11, 2005, 2:13:05 PM

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Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clanI like it.Very good.Make more.favs,(I might be coming bak soon,but for now,I'm staying at my new home)

KH_Fan525 on July 7, 2005, 11:46:56 PM

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KH_Fan525I really liked it write more poems!!!

wolfchick on July 7, 2005, 5:38:18 AM

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wolfchicknive keep ot up there pup! lol *rubs head*
Daray

Vampire_King_Gothika on July 3, 2005, 8:46:50 AM

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Vampire_King_GothikaWoooow........Just...Wow...You are a tru artist of literature and art alike, Melady Kuroi!

cresentmoonsL-Z on July 2, 2005, 7:10:51 AM

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cresentmoonsL-Zwow, this is so beautiful. it's so soft..and relaxing as I read,lol ^__^ I love how the mood in this poem ^__^ *faves *