Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted April 7, 2004 Updated April 7, 2004 Status Incomplete | its a poem about a woman whos pissed at the person who killed her.... sounds shoot I know =P Its better than it sounds.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
I didn’t deserve it,
I went to church, was loyal to everyone I knew.
But here I am, dead.
Why me?
It so unfair,
I wanted to fly to the top of the world.
Instead my hopes and dreams were shattered,
By someone who I never knew.
I always came first at school,
My mom and dad were so proud.
But I was so careless,
They wouldn’t be proud if they could see me now.
I remember as if it was yesterday,
Even if it is blurry.
I was having so much fun,
With no worries at all.
But then the car came blazing round the corner,
Quickly followed by the police.
Bullets were flying everywhere,
One hit me in the head.
I felt my body go limp,
And fall to the ground instantly.
I could feel the warm trickle of blood,
Running across my cheek.
I remember gasping as life left my body,
And my spirit shoot up to where I stand now
I miss everyone who I knew,
But I have a promise to the person who took life away from me…
that I will make you burn in hell.
I went to church, was loyal to everyone I knew.
But here I am, dead.
Why me?
It so unfair,
I wanted to fly to the top of the world.
Instead my hopes and dreams were shattered,
By someone who I never knew.
I always came first at school,
My mom and dad were so proud.
But I was so careless,
They wouldn’t be proud if they could see me now.
I remember as if it was yesterday,
Even if it is blurry.
I was having so much fun,
With no worries at all.
But then the car came blazing round the corner,
Quickly followed by the police.
Bullets were flying everywhere,
One hit me in the head.
I felt my body go limp,
And fall to the ground instantly.
I could feel the warm trickle of blood,
Running across my cheek.
I remember gasping as life left my body,
And my spirit shoot up to where I stand now
I miss everyone who I knew,
But I have a promise to the person who took life away from me…
that I will make you burn in hell.
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Demonic_Angel on April 7, 2004, 9:48:23 AM
I still think the same .... Its very kool and nicely written ^_____^