A humans weakness?
Submitted July 5, 2004 Updated July 5, 2004 Status Incomplete | My idea on what is the humans race weakness. Something i think we as a race deny more than anything.
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Chapter 1 - A humans Weakness?
Submitted: July 5, 2004 • Updated: July 5, 2004
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kath on November 14, 2006, 12:51:41 PM
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theWriter on February 7, 2006, 7:11:27 AM
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gohstann on September 9, 2005, 8:27:52 AM
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PacifisticSoldier on October 19, 2004, 12:39:33 PM
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Inuyashafan_133 on August 23, 2004, 6:04:48 AM
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Crazedyingyang on August 16, 2004, 10:30:53 AM
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a-drawer-4ever on July 13, 2004, 4:47:56 AM
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Lasher on July 10, 2004, 6:00:33 AM
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And Lexar, yeah, your just a little to up tight and close minded for this i think. And Everyone else, well thanks. I really wanted to get some serious comments on it. Glad i all got you for that ^_^ Thanks.
layzcarter on July 10, 2004, 5:55:31 AM
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Only one suggestion which coming from me doesn't mean much. I was thinking that maybe in the first and third paragraph you say "petty human emotions". It might flow better if you replace one of the phrases with something else of the same meaning. And the word weak seems to be used a lot. Maybe a thesaurus to change up some of the words. Just a thought. Keep in mind I'm no writer :)
iamem0tionless on July 7, 2004, 3:24:53 PM
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Sanoshi on July 6, 2004, 11:21:53 AM
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The part where you wrote about human emotions and connections (pretty much the first paragraph to the sixth) was something i can agree with. When you wrote about the connections and bonds between friends and family i understood it from boths sides. I'm a family kind of person so i strongly agree with that more than the friends, but i can relate to the friends meaning so much and how they make you feel that their friendship means a whole lot more than family.
You can also say the same thing about beginnnig bonds. Lol i realted that kinda to love for some odd reason. XD Big romance person here, but more times than not, you can sometimes feel if you can "connect" with someone you barely knew closer than the person you knew longer.
The ending was very deep. Emotions, feelings, the what not-- Is the core of everything. A very insightful and open minded thinking. Something at least one person has thought about before, if not, has thought about it now.
:D Fantastic Lasher~!
Lexar on July 5, 2004, 10:36:37 PM
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You have a very pessimistic view on the human mind, but it is our emotions and our selfconsiousness that seperates us from the animals. You say that humans remain primitive when it comes to understanding emotions and that it reduces us to weak and frail childs sometimes, but you forget that all the greatest achievments of humans are also a result of people driven to surpass themselves by passion, love or even hate. I'd say those who have no emotions have nothing to lose, and those that do have them can lose everything, but also win it all.
Jenniberry on July 5, 2004, 5:08:38 PM
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megasonic on July 5, 2004, 4:32:38 PM
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ChrisFox on July 5, 2004, 4:24:07 PM
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Sorceress_Ultimecia on July 5, 2004, 4:03:28 PM
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fallenangel on July 5, 2004, 10:14:49 AM
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