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Chapter 2 - Dawn of Sorrow

A story about a houndoom who goes on a wild rampage for love.He has lost his mate and cannot stop the rage.One girl is sent to stop it....what will happen?

Chapter 2 - Dawn of Sorrow

Chapter 2 - Dawn of Sorrow
The next day they awoke with growling stomachs.The female slowly got up and walked
over to the window.The grew wide-eyed as she looked at what had happened.A tornado
had blew in and knocked down all buildings.She nuzzled the male as he woke up and
slowly and sleepily padded over to the window.He soon realized what had
happened.”Houn houndoom!”,the female called as she began to cry.The male nodded and
stared unhappily at the destruction.What had become of his friends?His family?His
enemies?His life was spinning faster and faster as he slowly fell to the ground.The female
ran over to him and licked him on his forehead.She knew he was fading.She walked out of
the building as a gust of debris blew in her eyes.She couldn’t see,so she walked back
inside.She began to howl,wondering if anyone would come.She howled more,and knew
instantly no one would come.She layed down beside the weak and unconcious male
houndoom and acted as a mother torwards him.She went and got some sausages and
slowly began pushing them,one by one, into his mouth.She waited for hours for him to
wake up.Finally,a small eye opened.A soft breath caressed the male’s cheek.He opened his
other eye to see the female licking his forehead.She stopped as she saw him open his
eye.She barked as she pushed another sausage into his mouth.He accepted it as she slowly
began to lick his forehead again.He layed still.The licking felt good.It was the same as his
mother had done.He slowly began to get up and walked outside.The wind had died down
and no debris was flying everywhere.He slowly walked into the unknown...
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Plz comment!I need char ideas!

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White_Dragon on July 30, 2005, 7:25:30 PM

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White_DragonA tornado! OOOOOoooooooh!!what happens next!! oh you need ideas? ummmmmm..... How about the male gets into a battle? Mabey you already that.... Oh! Why don't both houndoom get into a battle!
Believe me I'm rubbish at ideas!