Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted June 5, 2004 Updated June 5, 2004 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Today I feel like drowning.
Just to slip under the water.
Where everything is quiet.
It would muffle my screams.
Everything is rippled under water.
It all turns shades of blue.
It feels like floating.
Halfway happy but mostly sad.
But still it's peaceful.
To think about it.
And then rise to the surface.
Unaware,
Because I have drowned.
I can no longer breathe.
Or do anything.
If someone finds me.
They might wonder.
But it still would be nice.
To die in all that quiet.
Without anyone to bother you.
As you slip away.
Somewhat peaceful.
Sometimes chaotic.
But oh well.
Just sink to the bottom.
Listen to the silence.
It might be the last thing you ever hear.
Sometimes we drown in other places.
We drown in blood.
In our fears.
In life.
But still.
It would be nice.
Just to drown.
In all that silence.
Just to slip under the water.
Where everything is quiet.
It would muffle my screams.
Everything is rippled under water.
It all turns shades of blue.
It feels like floating.
Halfway happy but mostly sad.
But still it's peaceful.
To think about it.
And then rise to the surface.
Unaware,
Because I have drowned.
I can no longer breathe.
Or do anything.
If someone finds me.
They might wonder.
But it still would be nice.
To die in all that quiet.
Without anyone to bother you.
As you slip away.
Somewhat peaceful.
Sometimes chaotic.
But oh well.
Just sink to the bottom.
Listen to the silence.
It might be the last thing you ever hear.
Sometimes we drown in other places.
We drown in blood.
In our fears.
In life.
But still.
It would be nice.
Just to drown.
In all that silence.
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Cutelilteen on September 22, 2005, 5:17:33 AM
Cutelilteen on
God, why am I crying? I love this poem. It's so sad and deep.firewingneko on March 16, 2005, 11:33:20 AM
firewingneko on
I do feel like that sometimes too... just wish to go in peace...Ban_Boredom on June 28, 2004, 7:34:45 AM
Ban_Boredom on
Wow ur an excellent ehh poet ne? this is amazing and i hope u get more up O_ORaenaAngel on June 25, 2004, 1:17:07 PM
RaenaAngel on
I like ur style, u should try rhymingsenkoneko on June 24, 2004, 1:08:56 PM
senkoneko on
Wow!Sometimes i think of doing that.
Really good poem. I like the way that you seem to know what it is like.
Magical_Stan on June 11, 2004, 9:41:54 AM
Magical_Stan on
Well, it's not really a suicide thing. I just wondered what that would be like.MusicBitch on June 9, 2004, 11:15:16 AM
MusicBitch on
OMG! I love your writeing it reminds me of myself alot of times i wish i could die jus die alone in the quiet without anyone around to stop me *sigh* wonderful job *+'s favs.