Chapter 1 - Meeting the Valkyria's
Submitted October 5, 2007 Updated October 5, 2007 Status Incomplete | This is a story about Dorinda, Dorthea, Alviss (pronounced Al-viss), Kargin (pronounced Kar-gin) Valkyria meeting the Elric's and something between Dorinda and Lt. Colonel Mustang. some kissing and cussing later on.
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Chapter 1 - Meeting the Valkyria's
Chapter 1 - Meeting the Valkyria's
Disclaimer: I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist only Dorinda, Doretha, Alviss, and Kargin for now the list will grow in later chapters.
One day in Central five kids stood together, one was around twenty the rest were younger, they were watching an Assessment.
“Come on mom, dad.” a little red, head said he had green eyes.
“Alviss you might as well not cheer.” the tall blonde-haired woman said she crystal blue eyes.
“That’s not fair Dorinda.” two blonde-haired girls said in unison one had green eyes the other girl had crystal blue eyes.
“I give up talking to you three Doretha, Alviss and Kargin.” Dorinda said handing Doretha the little red head baby she was holding.
“Stop being like that.” Alviss said as Dorinda walked away.
“GET BACK HERE DORINDA NYMPHADORA ANTONITTE MARIE VALKYRIE!” Doretha yelled. No one paid them any mind they always fought. After Dorinda had walked some way away from her family, she shook her head.
“Hey Miss Valkyria.” Major Hughes said walking up behind her.
“Oh hey Major Hughes before you ask I couldn’t stand them Alviss was cheering again.” Dorinda said glancing behind her and defending why she was alone.
“Will you meet someone then?” Hughes asked.
“I might as well mom is going to win again.” Dorinda said turning away from the Assessment. She walked away with Major Hughes.
“How do you know she will win?” Major Hughes asked.
“She trained harder.” Dorinda said. Major Hughes nodded and stopped.
“Lt. Colonel Mustang meet Dorinda Valkyria.” Major Hughes said. Dorinda had glanced backwards at the Assessment. Dorinda looked at him.
“Do Do Do come on Ichigo is crying.” Alviss said tugging on her arm.
“Viss can’t you see I’m in the middle of something tell Dor to handle it.” Dorinda said glancing back at Lt. Colonel Mustang.
“She tried but he wants you, please Do.” Alviss said a wine in his voice.
“Major you know after the Assessment you are invited to dinner Lt. Colonel Mustang if you would like to come, I’m sure my parents wouldn’t mind, Major could you tell him where we live I have a thing to take care of.” Dorinda said. Dorinda picked up Alviss and ran to where Doretha, Kargin, and Ichigo were standing.
“About time.” Doretha wined.
“Oh stop wining and give him to me.” Dorinda snapped after putting Alviss down. Doretha handed Dorinda Ichigo the moment he touched her arms he stopped.
“I left a Lt. Colonel for this.” Dorinda asked herself.
Later at the Valkyria House
“Pay up old man I told you mom would win.” Dorinda was telling her father.
“I hate when you are right, here it is.” Her father said handing her two dollars.
“I love when I’m right.” Dorinda said.
“Estele.” Dorinda called down the stairs.
“Yes Ms. Valkyria.” A woman with pink hair and blue eyes said in a maid outfit.
“Could you set up another spot please, I kinda short of invited a Lt. Colonel for dinner.” Dorinda said scratching her head.
“Ms. Valkyria don’t mess up your curls.” Another woman snapped she had blue hair and pink eyes in a maid outfit.
“Sorry Isabella (pronounced Is[/i] a Bella our at least my way).” Dorinda said. She was wearing a long dress that was purple and black. They heard a doorbell.
“Oh my god it’s them, I don’t even have the music ready yet.” Dorinda said panicking.
“Dorinda breath it could just be Iris with the groceries.” Her father said going to go get the door.
“Hey Do it’s the Major, Gracia and that Lt. Colonel.” Doretha said hopping around in Dorinda’s room.
“Dor aren’t you a little old to be hopping around?” Dorinda asked. Dorinda was standing in the upper floor.
“Hi everyone umm the music will be up in a bit.” Dorinda said. Dorinda walked back to her room. She glanced at the mirror.
“I can do this it is just a Lt. Colonel.” Dorinda told herself. She started some music.
I don’t own this song Fall Out Boy does it’s Dance Dance.
“He says he's no good with words but I'm worse
Barely stuttered out
"A joke of a romantic" or stuck to my tongue
Weighed down with words too over-dramatic
Tonight it's "it can't get much worse"
Vs. "no one should ever feel like.."
I'm two quarters and a heart down
And I don't want to forget how your voice sounds
These words are all I have so I'll write them
So you need them just to get by
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
You always fold just before you're found out
Drink up its last call
Last resort
But only the first mistake and I...
I'm two quarters and a heart down
And I don't want to forget how your voice sounds
These words are all I have so I'll write them
So you need them just to get by
Why don't you show me the little bit of spine
You've been saving for her mattress, love
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
Why don't you show me the little bit of spine
You've been saving for her mattress (mattress, mattress)
I only want sympathy in the form of you crawling into bed with me
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance this is the way they'd love (way they'd love)
Dance this is the way they'd love (way they'd love)
Dance this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance.” Dorinda sang. Her parents danced so did Major Hughes and Gracia, Lt. Colonel Mustang looked around. Dorinda went to go start some more music.
Pretty Handsome Awkward
By The Used
“Kickin' it out
Your dream vacation is my hostage refuge
A work in progress you bleed
Just like you puke while running a mile
I beg to differ, make me an offer
Walks on the rain you bleed
Just like you puke while running a mile
Hey, are you okay? (okay)
You look pretty low
Very handsome awkward
Do you feel okay? (okay)
You look pretty low
Very handsome awkward
Do you feel okay? (okay)
You look pretty low
Pretty low, pretty low
Pretty handsome awkward
Do you feel okay?
You look pretty low
Pretty low, pretty low
(handsome awkward)
Pretty handsome awkward
(handsome awkward)
kickin' it out
kickin’ it out
kickin’ it out
Pretty low!” Dorinda sang everyone was dancing.
“Isabella.” Dorinda called to her.
“Yes Ms. Valkyria?” Isabella asked.
“Could you dance with some one for me since I’m slightly busy?” Dorinda asked pointing to Mustang. Isabella nodded. Dorinda started some more music.
Passion’s Killing Floor
By H.I.M
“It's poetry carved in flesh
This beautiful hell of ours
To the deadliest sin we confess
(Tears of joy fill our eyes)
We are saved with its bigotries
My out-there prophecies of doom
My heart's a graveyard, baby
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
In my arms, you won't sleep safely
And of lust we are reborn
On our passion's killing floor
At the first kiss
the seeds of hatred are sewn
Back into darkness we flee
(To tear our hearts out)
We are saved where all fates fail
The light inside of our tomb
My heart's a graveyard, baby
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
In my arms, you won't sleep safely
And of lust we are reborn
On our passion's killing floor
My heart's a graveyard, baby
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
In my arms, you won't sleep safely
And of lust we are reborn
On our passion's killing floor
(My heart's a graveyard, baby)
My heart's a graveyard, baby
On our passion's killing floor
(In my arms, you won't sleep safely)
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
Forever more. . .” Dorinda sang. She watched as everyone danced, she had a smile spread across her face. Dorinda started more music
LoveFuryPassionEnergy
By Boy Hits Car
“He's like a lost flower
Growing up through a crack
In the bustling sidewalk
Moving like a river so sad
So hey, where we going?
Tell me where we've gone
Was there love and fury
Energy and passion
So f*ck your rules man
You step up, you'll go down fast
I've got to release all the
shoot that has made up my past
So go paint your face and
Proclaim thy warrior soul
Cuz life is a brutal fight un- Til we show
A shade of timelessness
For we are all distinct
And awaiting our
Transcendental release
So f*ck your rules man
You step up, you'll go down fast
I've got to release all the
shoot that has made up my past
So go let your soul dance baby
Time to free yourself at last
Unshackle your life's spirit
Fly away far from the past
Cuz it's gone
Like a lost flower growing with mad wind
Like a sad river who has no end
So f*ck your rules man
Cuz here comes my passion
So f*ck your rules man
Cuz here comes my love
So f*ck your rules man
Here comes pure energy
So f*ck your rules man
Cuz here comes my fury
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
So f*ck your rules man
You step up, you'll go down fast
I've got to release all the
shoot that has made up my past
So go let your soul dance baby
Time to free yourself at last
Unshackle your life's spirit
Fly away far from the past.” Dorinda sang when the dinner bell went.
Dorinda quickly scurried down the stairs as she hit the bottom step she tripped on nothing and landed in Roy’s arms. She glared at Doretha.
“Dor I’m going to get you later.” Dorinda said. After dinner she and Major were putting away clean glass cups when Major’s grip slipped and Dorinda tried catching it put it shattered hitting her with glass.
“What happened who broke it?” Her father demanded.
“It dropped and I broke it.” Dorinda said fighting back tears.
“That’s not true Dorinda I did.” Major Hughes said.
“Not they way we are taught we always brake it, I can fix it.” Dorinda said as she touched the glass it glowed blue and it fixed itself.
“Lt. Colonel would you like me to walk you home?” Dorinda asked putting the glass in the cabinet. He shrugged, Dorinda walked to go get her coat. As they walked Dorinda looked at the ground. She saw him stop.
“Well here you are I’d better be getting home so I can get in trouble.” Dorinda said turning around, when Roy turned to face her and…
To be continued.
Mawhahahah It’s a cliff hanger.
One day in Central five kids stood together, one was around twenty the rest were younger, they were watching an Assessment.
“Come on mom, dad.” a little red, head said he had green eyes.
“Alviss you might as well not cheer.” the tall blonde-haired woman said she crystal blue eyes.
“That’s not fair Dorinda.” two blonde-haired girls said in unison one had green eyes the other girl had crystal blue eyes.
“I give up talking to you three Doretha, Alviss and Kargin.” Dorinda said handing Doretha the little red head baby she was holding.
“Stop being like that.” Alviss said as Dorinda walked away.
“GET BACK HERE DORINDA NYMPHADORA ANTONITTE MARIE VALKYRIE!” Doretha yelled. No one paid them any mind they always fought. After Dorinda had walked some way away from her family, she shook her head.
“Hey Miss Valkyria.” Major Hughes said walking up behind her.
“Oh hey Major Hughes before you ask I couldn’t stand them Alviss was cheering again.” Dorinda said glancing behind her and defending why she was alone.
“Will you meet someone then?” Hughes asked.
“I might as well mom is going to win again.” Dorinda said turning away from the Assessment. She walked away with Major Hughes.
“How do you know she will win?” Major Hughes asked.
“She trained harder.” Dorinda said. Major Hughes nodded and stopped.
“Lt. Colonel Mustang meet Dorinda Valkyria.” Major Hughes said. Dorinda had glanced backwards at the Assessment. Dorinda looked at him.
“Do Do Do come on Ichigo is crying.” Alviss said tugging on her arm.
“Viss can’t you see I’m in the middle of something tell Dor to handle it.” Dorinda said glancing back at Lt. Colonel Mustang.
“She tried but he wants you, please Do.” Alviss said a wine in his voice.
“Major you know after the Assessment you are invited to dinner Lt. Colonel Mustang if you would like to come, I’m sure my parents wouldn’t mind, Major could you tell him where we live I have a thing to take care of.” Dorinda said. Dorinda picked up Alviss and ran to where Doretha, Kargin, and Ichigo were standing.
“About time.” Doretha wined.
“Oh stop wining and give him to me.” Dorinda snapped after putting Alviss down. Doretha handed Dorinda Ichigo the moment he touched her arms he stopped.
“I left a Lt. Colonel for this.” Dorinda asked herself.
Later at the Valkyria House
“Pay up old man I told you mom would win.” Dorinda was telling her father.
“I hate when you are right, here it is.” Her father said handing her two dollars.
“I love when I’m right.” Dorinda said.
“Estele.” Dorinda called down the stairs.
“Yes Ms. Valkyria.” A woman with pink hair and blue eyes said in a maid outfit.
“Could you set up another spot please, I kinda short of invited a Lt. Colonel for dinner.” Dorinda said scratching her head.
“Ms. Valkyria don’t mess up your curls.” Another woman snapped she had blue hair and pink eyes in a maid outfit.
“Sorry Isabella (pronounced Is[/i] a Bella our at least my way).” Dorinda said. She was wearing a long dress that was purple and black. They heard a doorbell.
“Oh my god it’s them, I don’t even have the music ready yet.” Dorinda said panicking.
“Dorinda breath it could just be Iris with the groceries.” Her father said going to go get the door.
“Hey Do it’s the Major, Gracia and that Lt. Colonel.” Doretha said hopping around in Dorinda’s room.
“Dor aren’t you a little old to be hopping around?” Dorinda asked. Dorinda was standing in the upper floor.
“Hi everyone umm the music will be up in a bit.” Dorinda said. Dorinda walked back to her room. She glanced at the mirror.
“I can do this it is just a Lt. Colonel.” Dorinda told herself. She started some music.
I don’t own this song Fall Out Boy does it’s Dance Dance.
“He says he's no good with words but I'm worse
Barely stuttered out
"A joke of a romantic" or stuck to my tongue
Weighed down with words too over-dramatic
Tonight it's "it can't get much worse"
Vs. "no one should ever feel like.."
I'm two quarters and a heart down
And I don't want to forget how your voice sounds
These words are all I have so I'll write them
So you need them just to get by
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
You always fold just before you're found out
Drink up its last call
Last resort
But only the first mistake and I...
I'm two quarters and a heart down
And I don't want to forget how your voice sounds
These words are all I have so I'll write them
So you need them just to get by
Why don't you show me the little bit of spine
You've been saving for her mattress, love
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
Why don't you show me the little bit of spine
You've been saving for her mattress (mattress, mattress)
I only want sympathy in the form of you crawling into bed with me
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance this is the way they'd love (way they'd love)
Dance this is the way they'd love (way they'd love)
Dance this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance.” Dorinda sang. Her parents danced so did Major Hughes and Gracia, Lt. Colonel Mustang looked around. Dorinda went to go start some more music.
Pretty Handsome Awkward
By The Used
“Kickin' it out
Your dream vacation is my hostage refuge
A work in progress you bleed
Just like you puke while running a mile
I beg to differ, make me an offer
Walks on the rain you bleed
Just like you puke while running a mile
Hey, are you okay? (okay)
You look pretty low
Very handsome awkward
Do you feel okay? (okay)
You look pretty low
Very handsome awkward
Do you feel okay? (okay)
You look pretty low
Pretty low, pretty low
Pretty handsome awkward
Do you feel okay?
You look pretty low
Pretty low, pretty low
(handsome awkward)
Pretty handsome awkward
(handsome awkward)
kickin' it out
kickin’ it out
kickin’ it out
Pretty low!” Dorinda sang everyone was dancing.
“Isabella.” Dorinda called to her.
“Yes Ms. Valkyria?” Isabella asked.
“Could you dance with some one for me since I’m slightly busy?” Dorinda asked pointing to Mustang. Isabella nodded. Dorinda started some more music.
Passion’s Killing Floor
By H.I.M
“It's poetry carved in flesh
This beautiful hell of ours
To the deadliest sin we confess
(Tears of joy fill our eyes)
We are saved with its bigotries
My out-there prophecies of doom
My heart's a graveyard, baby
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
In my arms, you won't sleep safely
And of lust we are reborn
On our passion's killing floor
At the first kiss
the seeds of hatred are sewn
Back into darkness we flee
(To tear our hearts out)
We are saved where all fates fail
The light inside of our tomb
My heart's a graveyard, baby
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
In my arms, you won't sleep safely
And of lust we are reborn
On our passion's killing floor
My heart's a graveyard, baby
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
In my arms, you won't sleep safely
And of lust we are reborn
On our passion's killing floor
(My heart's a graveyard, baby)
My heart's a graveyard, baby
On our passion's killing floor
(In my arms, you won't sleep safely)
And to evil we make love
On our passion's killing floor
Forever more. . .” Dorinda sang. She watched as everyone danced, she had a smile spread across her face. Dorinda started more music
LoveFuryPassionEnergy
By Boy Hits Car
“He's like a lost flower
Growing up through a crack
In the bustling sidewalk
Moving like a river so sad
So hey, where we going?
Tell me where we've gone
Was there love and fury
Energy and passion
So f*ck your rules man
You step up, you'll go down fast
I've got to release all the
shoot that has made up my past
So go paint your face and
Proclaim thy warrior soul
Cuz life is a brutal fight un- Til we show
A shade of timelessness
For we are all distinct
And awaiting our
Transcendental release
So f*ck your rules man
You step up, you'll go down fast
I've got to release all the
shoot that has made up my past
So go let your soul dance baby
Time to free yourself at last
Unshackle your life's spirit
Fly away far from the past
Cuz it's gone
Like a lost flower growing with mad wind
Like a sad river who has no end
So f*ck your rules man
Cuz here comes my passion
So f*ck your rules man
Cuz here comes my love
So f*ck your rules man
Here comes pure energy
So f*ck your rules man
Cuz here comes my fury
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
SO F*CK YOUR RULES MAN
So f*ck your rules man
You step up, you'll go down fast
I've got to release all the
shoot that has made up my past
So go let your soul dance baby
Time to free yourself at last
Unshackle your life's spirit
Fly away far from the past.” Dorinda sang when the dinner bell went.
Dorinda quickly scurried down the stairs as she hit the bottom step she tripped on nothing and landed in Roy’s arms. She glared at Doretha.
“Dor I’m going to get you later.” Dorinda said. After dinner she and Major were putting away clean glass cups when Major’s grip slipped and Dorinda tried catching it put it shattered hitting her with glass.
“What happened who broke it?” Her father demanded.
“It dropped and I broke it.” Dorinda said fighting back tears.
“That’s not true Dorinda I did.” Major Hughes said.
“Not they way we are taught we always brake it, I can fix it.” Dorinda said as she touched the glass it glowed blue and it fixed itself.
“Lt. Colonel would you like me to walk you home?” Dorinda asked putting the glass in the cabinet. He shrugged, Dorinda walked to go get her coat. As they walked Dorinda looked at the ground. She saw him stop.
“Well here you are I’d better be getting home so I can get in trouble.” Dorinda said turning around, when Roy turned to face her and…
To be continued.
Mawhahahah It’s a cliff hanger.
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