Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted June 27, 2004 Updated June 27, 2004 Status Incomplete | A very short poem I wrote last night while talking on the phone with my girlfriend.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
I had a dream a few months ago,
About a girl with perfect hair, perfect lips,
and a perfect personality.
Someone I could hold, someone I could trust,
And someone I could talk to.
I wish this dream would last forever,
I wish it would come true.
Now I realize it already has,
All because I met you.
6-26-04
About a girl with perfect hair, perfect lips,
and a perfect personality.
Someone I could hold, someone I could trust,
And someone I could talk to.
I wish this dream would last forever,
I wish it would come true.
Now I realize it already has,
All because I met you.
6-26-04
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Maroon005 on June 29, 2004, 3:00:50 AM
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awww this is bloody beautiful! if u say that to ANY girl im sure she will just want to hug u..well not me hehe..but really heart warming and great.shizuka on June 29, 2004, 12:18:08 AM
shizuka on
i wish i had a boyfriend who did that.*daydreams*yeah sam would know who i'm talking about(not the one in 8th the 1 going into 8th)BloodySunAngel on June 28, 2004, 4:57:30 PM
Now THAT is frickin' poetry! You shoulda titled this "Poetry at it's best"! *claps*.... uh.... oh yeah- *favorites* ^^ it rocks.