Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted October 24, 2005 Updated October 24, 2005 Status Incomplete | This is a poem I wrote on 10/24/05, and I'm dedicating this poem to a certain somone stuck in hurricanes.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
I'm worriedI'mworried.
We are so far apart.
Danger lurks where you are.
And I cannot even reach you.
I'm afraid.
The lightning, thunder, floods.
The harsh winds tearing phone lines down.
And ripping out power lights.
I'mterrified.
Your out there somewhere.
You and your family and friends.
And neighbors of old.
I'mshocked.
The hurricanes swirling and tearing apart your world.
Your safe haven.
And our link to each other.
I'm scared.
You might be hurt.
Or worse.
And I will never know.
I'mworried.
My love is out there.
Hurricanes swirling around my love.
And I can't hear my love scream.
We are so far apart.
Danger lurks where you are.
And I cannot even reach you.
I'm afraid.
The lightning, thunder, floods.
The harsh winds tearing phone lines down.
And ripping out power lights.
I'mterrified.
Your out there somewhere.
You and your family and friends.
And neighbors of old.
I'mshocked.
The hurricanes swirling and tearing apart your world.
Your safe haven.
And our link to each other.
I'm scared.
You might be hurt.
Or worse.
And I will never know.
I'mworried.
My love is out there.
Hurricanes swirling around my love.
And I can't hear my love scream.
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sis on December 31, 2005, 11:47:02 AM
sis on
Wow this is soooooooo deep I hade to read it over and over again because it was so good!You write so good this is great keep it up!^^YukinaObbsessionist on November 4, 2005, 8:34:26 AM
P.S. *Story to favez* ~_^YukinaObbsessionist on November 4, 2005, 8:34:08 AM
Hya! O_O TACKLING AND HUGGLING IS MINE! WHY DO PEOPLE ALWAYS STEAL THINGS OF MINE! ARG! *coughz* Anyway, Very nice poem, I like how you wrote it in stanza format, and it was so realistic. It was a great work of poetry. Your an excellent writer! Keep up the fantastic work! *tacklez/hugglez*~~~~~~~~~~LUVZ~~~~~~~~~grave_keeper on October 26, 2005, 11:51:10 AM
grave_keeper on
**eyes well up**...**tackles and hugs** me loves you!! this is a wonderful poem! your so good at writing!