Chapter 1 - Fire
Submitted November 13, 2005 Updated November 13, 2005 Status Incomplete | these are my element poems. It took me almost a year to come up with them all. Tell me what you think and if my time was well spent, your comments will be appreciated.
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Chapter 1 - Fire
Chapter 1 - Fire
The Elements:
Fire
Strikes swiftly, making his presence known.
No heart,
No soul
in this raging inferno.
He sits in the darkness
behind the furnace,
or under the stove.
Just waiting
He will wait
for however long it takes
seconds, minutes, hours, or even years.
He waits.
Just waits until you expect him no more.
Then he attacks
destroying your house
or even more.
There are many that survive this monster,
but there are just as many that have not.
The reason those have died is because
if given the chance
he will put you in a deadly trance.
The trance alone will not make you die, for you can still breath,
but the poison he releases will kill.
There is only one he fears,
He fears her, she is Water
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Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 11:37:54 AM
Neawolf on January 19, 2006, 5:55:48 AM
Neawolf on
YAh! fire is the best of the four elements. Nicely done, your a very good poetmystic_rat_theif on November 21, 2005, 10:41:13 AM
wow! THAT WAS SO POETIC! you made a way better poen than my "Bentley"one! great job!Xx_AviloriA_xX on November 19, 2005, 9:47:28 AM
fire has it beauty too, like bon fires^^ but its good non the less!Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:13:56 AM
Animanic on
Good job you got the BAD side of fire. but fire has a good side, by destroying it gives room for more to grow from the ashes of the old. Anyway, Very good, you can acually feel the warning it gives. NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:27:28 AM
5 out of 5. Very nice ^_^manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:46:28 AM
Fire is mean >:-)! Take him water! you have not wasted your time on this poem! They arevery good!
~Chemical-sweet~