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Chapter 2 - Water

these are my element poems. It took me almost a year to come up with them all. Tell me what you think and if my time was well spent, your comments will be appreciated.

Chapter 2 - Water

Chapter 2 - Water


The Elements:

Water

To help all those in need

that is her dream.

She will place herself in danger to fulfill this dream.

To save the thirsty,

She will summon the rains of life.

Unknowingly making another thirsty.

To save a house Fire tracked down

She summons a flood to extinguish the flames.

But when she does this though,

she is unaware that she, instead of saving the house,

destroys the town.

So no matter how kind hearted she

tries to be

she still takes lives unwillingly.

Her friend is the strong,

the crazy,

Wind.


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Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 11:43:41 AM

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Chemical-sweetwhoa,that's deep, I like your poems! I'm working on a story right now, maybe you can read it, but it's yaoi, you don't have to read it if you don't want to. again, great poems!
~chemical-sweet~

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:29:16 AM

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mystic_rat_theifomg omg omg! ILOVE IT!

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:16:18 AM

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AnimanicVery good. you got the good and bad of water, the calm stream that gives live to thouse who need it and the rapids that crush thouse who ride it.

NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:39:51 AM

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NegaDarkStarXAnother good one ^_^

manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:44:31 AM

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manga_cat_girlI think the water is to nice XD