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Chapter 4 - Earth

these are my element poems. It took me almost a year to come up with them all. Tell me what you think and if my time was well spent, your comments will be appreciated.

Chapter 4 - Earth

Chapter 4 - Earth


The Elements:

Earth

The strongest of them all

after all he can holds us all.

He gives us beauty to gaze at

with all the forests,

fields, meadows,

and mountains

we always see.

For Earth is a gentle giant,

nothing more.

Except when we get him angry.

For when this happens he is the most destructive of them all.

For he can swallow cities,

crush homes,

even take lives

and not regret it at all,

for he thinks we deserve it all.

He knows how to use his strength,

that he does.

That, again, is how we got our beauty on this planet.

So please, don't get Earth angry.

We want him happy.

Because we, atleast me,

doesn't want our lives to end

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mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:34:32 AM

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mystic_rat_theifthat was a great way to end the series of poems that you have made! i enjoyed it very much!

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:25:13 AM

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AnimanicEarth needs anger management. very good.
you be quiet.

*cat* poems are stupid. hey what are you doing. put me down! AAAAAAAA- *hits wall* I hate you

What was that!

nothing...

NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:47:57 AM

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NegaDarkStarXIm thankful Ive never had to see Earth angry ^_^

manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:41:30 AM

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manga_cat_girlEarth is kinda scary! We really dont want to make him mad! No, no!
That's important!