The Vampire's Slave
Submitted June 10, 2005 Updated March 6, 2006 Status Incomplete | Vampires often use human slaves for blood in this realm. One slave has always stood out from the rest, her name is Kaline. When vampire prince recieves her as a gift from his father then the trouble truely begins. |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Kalines arrival
Submitted: June 10, 2005 • Updated: June 10, 2005
Word count: 436 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 832
Chapter 2 - Kalines arrival continued
Submitted: July 2, 2005 • Updated: July 2, 2005
Word count: 688 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 829
Chapter 3 - Adjusting
Submitted: March 6, 2006 • Updated: March 6, 2006
Word count: 1913 • Size: 10k • Comments: 10 • views: 728
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xEmotional on September 8, 2007, 11:12:46 PM
xEmotional on (Chapter: 3)
you should continue ~Heatherenie on June 16, 2007, 4:04:54 PM
Heatherenie on (Chapter: 3)
I love the story!SilverKitsune on December 27, 2006, 1:21:58 AM
SilverKitsune on (Chapter: 3)
Snap, she is part vampire. :0SilverKitsune on December 27, 2006, 1:19:46 AM
SilverKitsune on (Chapter: 2)
I sense rape and then love D:SilverKitsune on December 27, 2006, 1:18:28 AM
SilverKitsune on (Chapter: 1)
that was like a paragraph D:. You gotta write these chapters longer D:.pugglewugglebell on December 22, 2006, 3:48:53 AM
pugglewugglebell on (Chapter: 3)
Kohaku is from that movie Spirited away right? (He is a cutie! ^_^) This is really good. You should continue writing! : DBrazillianPaula13 on November 16, 2006, 10:17:37 PM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 3)
Awesome story! Please write more!!!^_^MandyLovsDaPeoples on August 2, 2006, 5:12:13 AM
MandyLovsDaPeoples on (Chapter: index)
Awsome i cant wait for the next chap ^_^Mcrluvr on July 30, 2006, 4:00:59 PM
Mcrluvr on (Chapter: index)
This is a awesome story..I love it.Jiki_Chi026 on May 15, 2006, 8:04:23 AM
Jiki_Chi026 on (Chapter: 3)
OMG!! IM LUVIN DIS SO0O0O0O0O MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CNT WAIT 4 AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!Keep on ritin! ^_^ *faves*
Night_Wolf on April 24, 2006, 1:02:23 PM
Night_Wolf on (Chapter: 3)
The part about food is actually based on how my dad makes me wake up on breaks from school...i would sleep 'til night but the food is always oh so tempting....sernina on March 24, 2006, 11:40:09 PM
sernina on (Chapter: 3)
I like it loads! yay!Write the next bit soon!
Cant wait! :)
sernina
evil_pixie on March 16, 2006, 6:11:48 AM
evil_pixie on (Chapter: 3)
wow that part was really dramatic, i really like it! well done hope you keep writing!!!kittymobile on February 1, 2006, 1:24:28 AM
kittymobile on (Chapter: 2)
i like this story, it's short but really detailed and imagery is conjured up. well done:) please can you tell me when you've wrote more and if you've got time could you please read my story?holly.
theWriter on December 1, 2005, 7:42:28 AM
theWriter on (Chapter: 2)
I think you're stopping in bad places to keep us glued to it!How cruel, but at the same time, clever...Oughta try that sometime.
Nice. I like the plot. The voice is good.
dannyrog on July 22, 2005, 4:07:01 AM
dannyrog on (Chapter: 2)
it's realy good. most vampire fic's are set in L.A (i dont know why) even mine, but this puts origanal idea's into it. Keep up the great work, cant wait for next part.Amourwolf on July 21, 2005, 2:36:39 PM
Amourwolf on (Chapter: 2)
awesome story ,cant wait for more !*faves*fallen_pixie on July 21, 2005, 2:32:03 AM
fallen_pixie on (Chapter: 2)
i like the story so far it really good!please tell me when u write more
evil_pixie on July 10, 2005, 5:37:04 AM
evil_pixie on (Chapter: 2)
this is really well written and the ending isn't in a bad place hehe=^.^= keep writingChicci on July 2, 2005, 8:25:38 PM
Chicci on (Chapter: 2)
Cool.evil_pixie on June 29, 2005, 2:17:19 AM
evil_pixie on (Chapter: 1)
please write more its really easy to get into and ahhhh i need to read more^_^Chicci on June 16, 2005, 12:14:10 AM
Chicci on (Chapter: 1)
Wright mooore please!!Night_Wolf on June 10, 2005, 9:43:22 AM
Night_Wolf on (Chapter: 1)
I know that I ended it in a cruddy place, but I didn't have time to type more.