Chapter 1 - the letter
Submitted September 21, 2006 Updated June 18, 2007 Status Incomplete | Ok This a story about B.A.S. xD To go to tokyo to see Malon xD And going to meet the bladebreakers XD Watch out somtimes there is some bad English
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Chapter 1 - the letter
Chapter 1 - the letter
On a Sunny day In Tokyo
Erik: Wow this place of the house is very dusty mom.
Anouk: I know Erik that's why we must clean it.
Erik found an old photo book in a old box and looked in it.
Erik: wow mom is that you??
Anouk: Let me see it *she took the book* Yep this is me and you're dad and some of our friends.
Erik: Why haven't I seen them?
Anouk: Well they all live somwhere else
Erik: Well tell me something about that time than =).
Anouk: You really want to hear that?
Erk: jep Tell me xD
Anouk; well.. ok but this could take a while.
I remember that me and my 2 best friends Brenda and Sanne went to Tokyo to visit a friend of mine Malon.
She invited us because she wanted to show us how she lived.
Anouk: Ok That was a long trip. From Holland to Japan.
Brenda: Yeah finally we got out of it.
Anouk: You slept the whole trip?!
Brenda: well stil it was a long trip
Sanne: waaahhh!!!!
Anouk: huh?
Brenda: What's wrong with you??
Sanne: look the city is so beautiful =3
Brenda: That's why you screamed??
Sanne: uhh...Yes =D
Brenda: -_-'
When we were "Talking" Malon and some of her friends were waiting for us.
Malon: hmmm.. aahh there they are =) Anouk I'm here!!!!
Max: I think she doesn't hear you.
Daichi: Or she's ignoring you.
Tyson: Oh...just grow up Daichi
Daichi: And since when are you one of the grown ups ¬¬
Malon: *sigh* oh just shut up you 2 come on let's go to them.
Max: I think we have a little problem
Malon: And what's that?
Tyson: I'll say it xD There gone
Malon: oh great! Well let's split up and search for them
And they split up and began the search while we were on the toilet xD
Well we came out of.
Brenda; Why couldn't you go on the plain!!
Sanne: well it's scary and you weren't there
Anouk: ow come on Sanne you're 16
Sanne: yeah so :P
Brenda: whatever.
While we were talking again a weird man came our way.
Sanne: hm... look someone's coming this way
Brenda: maybe he want's to go to the toilet to?
Sanne: I don't think so
The man stopped.
Man: What are you sweet girls doing here all by yourselfs.
Anouk: Waiting for a friend
Brenda; uhu...That's right
Man: Well I shall wait with you then.
AnoukNo thanks mister
Brenda: we can do that by ourselfs.
Man: are you sure *touched her cheek*
Anouk: yes we are * she turned away*
Man: *took her arm* you're not going anywhere!
Bremda: ey you stupid one ler her go?? *she gave him the scared look*
Man: ooeehh I'm so scared ¬¬
Sanne: You should be
Anouk: LET ME GO!!!!!! *her eyes turned into the eyes of a wolf*
Tyson: hm? passed by and saw it* Ey freak let that girl go
Man: Oh great another little kid
Tyson: *stepped on the man his foot*
Man: aauuww *let anouk go* Why you Little
Tyson: go or you will have allot more pain than that!!
Man: I will come back *ran away*
Anouk: Thanks....uhh...
Tyson: My name is Tyson ^^ and you are??
Anouk: my name is anouk and these are me friends Brenda and Sanne ^^
Tyson: wait do you know Malon??
Anouk: Yes I do she said she would be here but I didn't saw her
Tyson: I know where she is ^^ follow me ^^
Brenda: Finally someone who knows the way I hope
Sanne: Yep Yep xD
We followed him and finally got there ^^
Tyson: look what I found ^^
Malon: hm? Anouk =D *hugged her* ^^ what happened?
Anouk: long story xD
Malon : Tell me
She told the guys what happenned.
Max: aha so that's why you're arm is red
Anouk: uhu
Daichi: haha Tyson saved you oh come on :P
Tyson: Yes I did ¬¬
Anouk: uhh...
'Malon: well you're safe and that's important ^^
It was almost evening and We were in our hotel.
Malon: Tomorrow you will see the rest of my friends first go and rest a little bit ^^
Brenda: Thanks ^^
I was with Tyson in another room
Anouk: It's really sweet what you did =3
Tyson: aahhww it was nothing xD *blushed*
Anouk: well who knew what happenend if you didn't show up
Tyson: hehe xD
Anouk: I don't know how to thank you ^^
Tyson: uhh...
Anouk: *she gave a kis on his cheek*
Tyson: *blushed again XD*
Malon: *came in the room* uhhh.. Tyson why are you blushing??
Tyson: n..No..Nothing xD
Malon: ok come on we have to go
Tyson: ok bye bye xD
Anouk; bye xD
And they left.
It was getting late and we got to sleep.
But someone got into our room and left something.
And then he was away.
Well it was getting morning and Sanne was awake already xD
Sanne *Got out of her bed and saw the thing that was left on the table* what the?? *it was a bear and a letter with the nameCoCo on it* huh ok Anouk Brenda wake up!!!
Brenda; no way
Anouk: *helt her pillow on her head*
Sanne: ooeehh I know something *she turned a single from frans bauer on xD*
Anouk: hm? NOO TURN IT OFF!!!
Brenda; NOOOO!!!
Sanne Ok now that you are awake here look
Brenda: huh CoCo? Who the hell is CoCo??
Anouk: I don't know ??
Sanne: well maybe we should open it
Brenda: It's not our letter Sanne
Anouk: hmmm.....
Sanne; so what *openend it* huh!!
Anouk: what?
Brenda: Well??
Erik: Wow this place of the house is very dusty mom.
Anouk: I know Erik that's why we must clean it.
Erik found an old photo book in a old box and looked in it.
Erik: wow mom is that you??
Anouk: Let me see it *she took the book* Yep this is me and you're dad and some of our friends.
Erik: Why haven't I seen them?
Anouk: Well they all live somwhere else
Erik: Well tell me something about that time than =).
Anouk: You really want to hear that?
Erk: jep Tell me xD
Anouk; well.. ok but this could take a while.
I remember that me and my 2 best friends Brenda and Sanne went to Tokyo to visit a friend of mine Malon.
She invited us because she wanted to show us how she lived.
Anouk: Ok That was a long trip. From Holland to Japan.
Brenda: Yeah finally we got out of it.
Anouk: You slept the whole trip?!
Brenda: well stil it was a long trip
Sanne: waaahhh!!!!
Anouk: huh?
Brenda: What's wrong with you??
Sanne: look the city is so beautiful =3
Brenda: That's why you screamed??
Sanne: uhh...Yes =D
Brenda: -_-'
When we were "Talking" Malon and some of her friends were waiting for us.
Malon: hmmm.. aahh there they are =) Anouk I'm here!!!!
Max: I think she doesn't hear you.
Daichi: Or she's ignoring you.
Tyson: Oh...just grow up Daichi
Daichi: And since when are you one of the grown ups ¬¬
Malon: *sigh* oh just shut up you 2 come on let's go to them.
Max: I think we have a little problem
Malon: And what's that?
Tyson: I'll say it xD There gone
Malon: oh great! Well let's split up and search for them
And they split up and began the search while we were on the toilet xD
Well we came out of.
Brenda; Why couldn't you go on the plain!!
Sanne: well it's scary and you weren't there
Anouk: ow come on Sanne you're 16
Sanne: yeah so :P
Brenda: whatever.
While we were talking again a weird man came our way.
Sanne: hm... look someone's coming this way
Brenda: maybe he want's to go to the toilet to?
Sanne: I don't think so
The man stopped.
Man: What are you sweet girls doing here all by yourselfs.
Anouk: Waiting for a friend
Brenda; uhu...That's right
Man: Well I shall wait with you then.
AnoukNo thanks mister
Brenda: we can do that by ourselfs.
Man: are you sure *touched her cheek*
Anouk: yes we are * she turned away*
Man: *took her arm* you're not going anywhere!
Bremda: ey you stupid one ler her go?? *she gave him the scared look*
Man: ooeehh I'm so scared ¬¬
Sanne: You should be
Anouk: LET ME GO!!!!!! *her eyes turned into the eyes of a wolf*
Tyson: hm? passed by and saw it* Ey freak let that girl go
Man: Oh great another little kid
Tyson: *stepped on the man his foot*
Man: aauuww *let anouk go* Why you Little
Tyson: go or you will have allot more pain than that!!
Man: I will come back *ran away*
Anouk: Thanks....uhh...
Tyson: My name is Tyson ^^ and you are??
Anouk: my name is anouk and these are me friends Brenda and Sanne ^^
Tyson: wait do you know Malon??
Anouk: Yes I do she said she would be here but I didn't saw her
Tyson: I know where she is ^^ follow me ^^
Brenda: Finally someone who knows the way I hope
Sanne: Yep Yep xD
We followed him and finally got there ^^
Tyson: look what I found ^^
Malon: hm? Anouk =D *hugged her* ^^ what happened?
Anouk: long story xD
Malon : Tell me
She told the guys what happenned.
Max: aha so that's why you're arm is red
Anouk: uhu
Daichi: haha Tyson saved you oh come on :P
Tyson: Yes I did ¬¬
Anouk: uhh...
'Malon: well you're safe and that's important ^^
It was almost evening and We were in our hotel.
Malon: Tomorrow you will see the rest of my friends first go and rest a little bit ^^
Brenda: Thanks ^^
I was with Tyson in another room
Anouk: It's really sweet what you did =3
Tyson: aahhww it was nothing xD *blushed*
Anouk: well who knew what happenend if you didn't show up
Tyson: hehe xD
Anouk: I don't know how to thank you ^^
Tyson: uhh...
Anouk: *she gave a kis on his cheek*
Tyson: *blushed again XD*
Malon: *came in the room* uhhh.. Tyson why are you blushing??
Tyson: n..No..Nothing xD
Malon: ok come on we have to go
Tyson: ok bye bye xD
Anouk; bye xD
And they left.
It was getting late and we got to sleep.
But someone got into our room and left something.
And then he was away.
Well it was getting morning and Sanne was awake already xD
Sanne *Got out of her bed and saw the thing that was left on the table* what the?? *it was a bear and a letter with the nameCoCo on it* huh ok Anouk Brenda wake up!!!
Brenda; no way
Anouk: *helt her pillow on her head*
Sanne: ooeehh I know something *she turned a single from frans bauer on xD*
Anouk: hm? NOO TURN IT OFF!!!
Brenda; NOOOO!!!
Sanne Ok now that you are awake here look
Brenda: huh CoCo? Who the hell is CoCo??
Anouk: I don't know ??
Sanne: well maybe we should open it
Brenda: It's not our letter Sanne
Anouk: hmmm.....
Sanne; so what *openend it* huh!!
Anouk: what?
Brenda: Well??
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AtemuLover on September 21, 2006, 6:54:55 PM
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Great story Anouk. I really like it^^