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The Pretender.

A new evil has arrived at Emerald Cove now:Onyx,Brute,Tala,Danni,Snowy,Kali,Bruce,Alan,Knuckles,and Shadow. Must begin their quest in a search and destroy mission.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The quest begins.
Submitted: July 14, 2008 • Updated: July 14, 2008
Word count: 220 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 244

Chapter 2 - Chaos begins
Submitted: July 14, 2008 • Updated: July 14, 2008
Word count: 228 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 266

Chapter 3 - On the run!
Submitted: July 14, 2008 • Updated: July 14, 2008
Word count: 132 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 226

Chapter 4 - The kiss.
Submitted: July 14, 2008 • Updated: July 14, 2008
Word count: 186 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 225

Chapter 5 - Viper The Hedgehog.
Submitted: July 14, 2008 • Updated: July 14, 2008
Word count: 157 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 296

Chapter 6 - The Raid.
Submitted: July 14, 2008 • Updated: July 14, 2008
Word count: 273 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 227

Chapter 7 - Land how?
Submitted: July 15, 2008 • Updated: July 15, 2008
Word count: 173 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 215

Chapter 8 - The Belt Of Mystic Power!
Submitted: July 15, 2008 • Updated: July 15, 2008
Word count: 271 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 209

Chapter 9 - RUNAWAY!!!!
Submitted: July 15, 2008 • Updated: July 15, 2008
Word count: 133 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 215

Chapter 10 - Shire Island
Submitted: July 15, 2008 • Updated: July 15, 2008
Word count: 161 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 204

Chapter 11 - The ultimate battle!
Submitted: July 15, 2008 • Updated: July 15, 2008
Word count: 408 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 272

Comments

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Anikue123 on July 15, 2008, 4:33:31 AM

Anikue123 on (Chapter: 11)
Anikue123^^

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 15, 2008, 4:19:57 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
OnyxTheHedgehogLol yea

Anikue123 on July 15, 2008, 3:03:48 AM

Anikue123 on (Chapter: 10)
Anikue123cool hope you write more ^^

Anikue123 on July 15, 2008, 2:56:00 AM

Anikue123 on (Chapter: 7)
Anikue123yay cool :D

SONICXROUGELUVA on July 15, 2008, 2:55:09 AM

SONICXROUGELUVA on (Chapter: 10)
SONICXROUGELUVAGOT MY STRENTH AND GUNS AN' SWORD!! CHEAK!!!

Anikue123 on July 15, 2008, 2:51:02 AM

Anikue123 on (Chapter: 5)
Anikue123yay ^^

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 15, 2008, 1:49:49 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehoglol

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 14, 2008, 11:44:32 PM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehogyep did u know there r 2 alans in the story ? O_O

shadic_the_hedgehog on July 14, 2008, 1:46:30 PM

shadic_the_hedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
shadic_the_hedgehogwoah....dude your story is really good but i saw my characters name and freaked out alittle but ur story is good keep it up (my OC and my name is Alan)

notconfused on July 14, 2008, 1:10:55 PM

notconfused on (Chapter: 6)
notconfusedcool

SpeedOfSound on July 14, 2008, 8:05:04 AM

SpeedOfSound on (Chapter: 4)
SpeedOfSoundAww, cute! ^_^

SpeedOfSound on July 14, 2008, 8:04:19 AM

SpeedOfSound on (Chapter: 3)
SpeedOfSoundCool! When does Danni come in, I wonder.

SpeedOfSound on July 14, 2008, 8:02:35 AM

SpeedOfSound on (Chapter: 2)
SpeedOfSound*laughs* That was awesome!

SpeedOfSound on July 14, 2008, 8:00:36 AM

SpeedOfSound on (Chapter: 1)
SpeedOfSoundOoh, this is exciting! :D

Anikue123 on July 14, 2008, 5:55:51 AM

Anikue123 on (Chapter: 3)
Anikue123yay make more :D

SONICXROUGELUVA on July 14, 2008, 4:56:31 AM

SONICXROUGELUVA on (Chapter: 3)
SONICXROUGELUVAWOOOOOOOOOW!! nice!! i think im an icebreaker in this story! im like the hulk!!! grrrrrrrrrr!!!

SONICXROUGELUVA on July 14, 2008, 4:49:57 AM

SONICXROUGELUVA on (Chapter: 2)
SONICXROUGELUVAcool! AT HIGH SCHOOL LIKE MINE!

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 14, 2008, 4:26:06 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehogbecause i am!

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 14, 2008, 4:25:55 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehogDo you guys want me to make a 3rd now?

notconfused on July 14, 2008, 4:13:36 AM

notconfused on (Chapter: 2)
notconfusedawzome!

notconfused on July 14, 2008, 3:49:53 AM

notconfused on (Chapter: 1)
notconfusedOOOO I WOUNDER WAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!!XD

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 14, 2008, 3:49:15 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehogim gonna start chapter 2 choas begins

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 14, 2008, 3:45:29 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehogX3

OnyxTheHedgehog on July 14, 2008, 3:42:17 AM

OnyxTheHedgehog on (Chapter: index)
OnyxTheHedgehogHERE IT IS!