Chapter 11 - oh no.....

The Battle ship crashed right into the castle where Danni and Tawna was.

Viper:Al right brother hand them over!

Emerald:no..

Onyx:*sees his brothers and sisters hanging on walls from their legs* BROTHER LET THEM GO!

Emerald:no say good bye to Diamond(age 2 white hedgehog,girl), Ruby(age 11 red, boy),Opal(purple age 18),Topaz(Brown age 15,boy)
and Pearl(age 7 girl)

Onyx:Kaineo!*Kanieo turned Into a blade of light)

Emerald punched Onyx in the face and sent him flying.

Viper: GRRR...*Viper turned into BEAST VIPER, He grew horns turned dark red and his blach highlights got longer and bigger and hes eyes where black.*

Viper hit Emerald in his lower stomach and axe kicked his head.

Emerald:*Coughs out blood*

Viper upercuts, then punches in stomach 10 times then gave a WHACK IN THE HEAD to emerald which he coughs up more blood.

Then Alan(shadic) joined the fight.

Alan Kicked Emerald's head and Emerald span around.

then u saw a dark arua where Onyx was.

Onyx:BUNKAIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!

Onyx turned into Dark Onyx.He grabed his sword.

Emerald grab he katana out of its case.

Swords clashed everywhere.

Blizzard:I cant let this happen.
Blizzard almost punched emerald but then Emerald grabbed his arm.

Emerald:little punk.and Emerald threw him.

Onyx turned pitch black he grew horns shaped like fire and then the eyes turned red.

Pitch Dark Onyx:U little*then Beast Viper stoped him*

Beast Viper:no let me.

Onyx turned normal.

Beast Viper got stabbed in the arm by Emerald but it had no effect.

Onyx:grabbed everyone hanging down.

Onyx:Danni i've got to do this but its risky

They both kiss

Danni:U cant do this Onyx we could be forever.

Onyx: i have to..

Danni:NOOO!

Onyx:Danni...

Danni:Onyx listen to me!

Onyx:Its okay.

Danni:ok be carefull..

Onyx:Choas EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A beam of light came out of Onyx and it took the evil right out of Emerald.

Emerald:Huh? what happend?ONYX!

Onyx laid down on the floor cuts all over.

everyone gatherd around.

Danni:ONYX!

Danni ran to onyx and fell right next to him.

Danni started crying.

Onyx:i'll be okay*he gave everyone a thumbs up.

Diamond:gah gah goo goo.

Opal:You dont need to see this Diamond.

Ruby:Brother....*starts crying*

Topaz:its okay.

Onyx stoped breathing and stoped moveing.

Pearl:WAHHHHHH BROTHER I'LL MISS U!

Pyremerald:Hes...gone...

Tala:o boy...

Snowy:He'll be remembered.

Tawna:Viper :(*starts crying on Viper*

Viper:shh dont cry...

Onyx's spirit came out of his body.

Onyx:good bye everyone.

Onyx came and hugged Danni.

Danni:*Crys*you're dead i cant believe it...

Onyx:dont think of it like that. i have to go.

Onyx Went up into the clouds slowly.

everyone watched..

Wrighter:And so our hero of light has perished into the skys and for this story he is dead(not in anything else but in this story).
And so everyone lived their happy lives except for the family of jewls(Onyx's family) they had to live with the thought of their brother died for another brother Emerald... Emerald has cried everyday he thought and heard and seen anything about Onyx.

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