Chapter 1 - Blood (My Favorite Soldier Poem)
Submitted March 29, 2006 Updated March 29, 2006 Status Incomplete | Years of wars and soldiers, sorrow and repreive. Poetry of battle, soldiers, and life in the world of war.
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Chapter 1 - Blood (My Favorite Soldier Poem)
Chapter 1 - Blood (My Favorite Soldier Poem)
Red, red is all I see, red is all around me,
My comrades line the ground,
Torn and battered, and dying or dead,
I hear the fatal gunshots, as well as piercing screams,
I look upon my hands, but it is not them I see,
Instead red, red is all I see,
Staining deeply my clothes once black and green,
Now it is my turn to take a cannon shot, I strike a match,
And light it and the fuse goes out, a huge explosion,
And once again red, red raining down, I feel the drops,
On my face they drip to my open mouth, and that is when I fall,
To my knees and on my dying breath "Lord I'm coming home",
That's when I then saw black
My comrades line the ground,
Torn and battered, and dying or dead,
I hear the fatal gunshots, as well as piercing screams,
I look upon my hands, but it is not them I see,
Instead red, red is all I see,
Staining deeply my clothes once black and green,
Now it is my turn to take a cannon shot, I strike a match,
And light it and the fuse goes out, a huge explosion,
And once again red, red raining down, I feel the drops,
On my face they drip to my open mouth, and that is when I fall,
To my knees and on my dying breath "Lord I'm coming home",
That's when I then saw black
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Enigma_Girl on April 1, 2006, 3:18:26 AM
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i have strong emotions on wars, and this poem, it's awesome...