Chapter 0 - My crappy little poem
Submitted February 1, 2007 Updated February 1, 2007 Status Complete | This was the result of not sleeping for a few days, weired thing kept popping into my head, I posted this a very long time ago on my profile, but I decided to finally post it here to see what happens!
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Chapter 0 - My crappy little poem
Chapter 0 - My crappy little poem
The stairs to my mind are weak
and crumbling,
the thoughts of a freak are steep
and stumbling,
all of my friends are meek and mumbling,
and all I have is the box it came in.
And after I die and rot
away,
you will all come with
respect to pay,
I will say nothing but
'go away',
I need my sleep anyway.
And the years will pass,
the world will change,
I will stay put
in the box you made.
Soon no one will
visit,
and I will be forgotten,
yet I'll still be here,
tired and rotten,
And people will say,
who is this person the
world not wanted,
they threw him out
in a perfectly good box!
and crumbling,
the thoughts of a freak are steep
and stumbling,
all of my friends are meek and mumbling,
and all I have is the box it came in.
And after I die and rot
away,
you will all come with
respect to pay,
I will say nothing but
'go away',
I need my sleep anyway.
And the years will pass,
the world will change,
I will stay put
in the box you made.
Soon no one will
visit,
and I will be forgotten,
yet I'll still be here,
tired and rotten,
And people will say,
who is this person the
world not wanted,
they threw him out
in a perfectly good box!
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alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 11:47:56 PM
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Lol. You write good for being deprived of sleep. I hear you on the strange things popping into your head. I'm on my third day without sleep. Damn 72 hour shifts! (starts babbling about how he can't stand purple cows) I think I need sleep!WhiteLighting681 on June 5, 2007, 6:01:12 AM
This is my FAVORITE poem. FAVORITE. I love the ending this could even be a song! It reminds me of the song "Heart-Shaped Box." I'm so faving this.QuanticChaos1000 on June 5, 2007, 5:20:46 PM
Cool I really like "Heart shaped box" by Nirvana too!RogueTheBat18 on February 1, 2007, 7:57:18 PM
Whoa, thats awesome, some of the best poetry outide of Aust i hav heard in a long time, write a couple more.Faves!!
Royd on February 1, 2007, 10:53:59 AM
Royd on
Dude that's awesome you may (apparently) suck at writing but your a good poet keep it up man!QuanticChaos1000 on February 1, 2007, 5:26:01 AM
I'm not a writer, I like to leave that to people who have talent and skills, like Royd and RogueTheBat18, I just posted this for my own curiosity!